Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复表达，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

Ejemplo: I was very good at memorising things before I turned 20, but now my memory is not as sharp as it used to be.

Sugerencia: 回答不够具体，表达不流畅且缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子或原因支持。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things when my life was very busy and fast-paced.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明需要记住的具体事项，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: I need to remember to take my keys, wallet, and phone before I leave the house.

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但有些表达不够准确，且句子较长。建议使用更准确的表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down and review them regularly. Also, I use my phone's alarm clock to remind me of important tasks.

× I think before 20 years old I am very excellent at memory memorizing things, but now I'm less uh, I also forgot got things and uh, memory become unclear.

✓ I think before I was 20 years old, I was very good at memorizing things, but now I'm worse. I also forget things and my memory has become unclear.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。描述过去的情况时，应该用过去时态，如"was"而不是"am"，"forgot"应改为"forget"以符合现在时态描述现在的情况。"memory become unclear"应改为"memory has become unclear"，使用现在完成时表示从过去到现在的变化。

× I think before 20 years old I am very excellent at memory memorizing things, but now I'm less uh, I also forgot got things and uh, memory become unclear.

✓ I think before I was 20 years old, I was very good at memorizing things, but now I'm worse. I also forget things and my memory has become unclear.

"before 20 years old"应改为"before I was 20 years old"，需要加上主语和动词，且"at memory memorizing things"表达不正确，应改为"good at memorizing things"。

× Uh, it depends on how, how busy the life that I pass, uh, if the rhythm of my life is more fast.

✓ Uh, it depends on how busy the life I live is, uh, if the rhythm of my life is faster.

"the life that I pass"表达不正确，应改为"the life I live"。"more fast"应改为比较级形式"faster"。

× For one hand, I need to on one hand, I need to remember the things I bring before I getting out my door. And it's I think it's a life area.

✓ On one hand, I need to remember the things I bring before I get out of my door. And I think it's a life habit.

"For one hand"应改为"On one hand"。"before I getting out my door"应改为"before I get out of my door"，动词形式和介词使用错误。"it's a life area"表达不清，应改为"it's a life habit"。

× For one hand, I need to on one hand, I need to remember the things I bring before I getting out my door. And it's I think it's a life area.

✓ On one hand, I need to remember the things I bring before I get out of my door. And I think it's a life habit.

"before I getting out"中"getting"应改为动词原形"get"，因为前面有助动词"do"的省略形式。

× Hmm. I often write down, uh, if I write down, I think, uh, I repeat them and uh, they pay the experience. So I often don't forget.

✓ Hmm. I often write things down. If I write them down, I think I repeat them and they stay in my memory. So I often don't forget.

"they pay the experience"表达不正确，应改为"they stay in my memory"或类似表达。

× And sometimes I use some tools on my phone, uh, like alarm clock.

✓ And sometimes I use some tools on my phone, like an alarm clock.

"like alarm clock"前应加不定冠词"an"，表示泛指一个闹钟。