Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains redundancy and unclear phrases like "forget to forget my appointment." Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I am not very good at memorising things because I sometimes forget my appointments, which upsets me. Therefore, I usually mark important dates on my calendar to avoid missing them.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and has some grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas clearly. Also, try to complete your sentences fully for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, when I go out shopping, I sometimes forget to bring my phone, which I need to pay for items. This usually happens when I am very busy, and it causes inconvenience.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and repetitions. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember small things such as eating an apple every morning because I believe it is healthy. However, sometimes I forget to eat or bring apples to class, which I regret.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words like 'however' to show contrast and avoid repeating phrases. Also, try to use plural forms correctly and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by writing them down on my phone or asking a friend to remind me. However, sometimes they forget, so I send them messages or give missed calls to ensure I don't forget later.

× I definitely think I'm not good at memorizing the things 'cause sometimes I even forget to forget my appointment and something like that, which is unusual, unusual and it's pretty much upsets me.

✓ I definitely think I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I even forget my appointment and things like that, which is unusual and it pretty much upsets me.

The phrase 'forget to forget' is incorrect; the verb 'forget' should be used in its base form without repetition. Also, 'the things' is unnecessary here. The sentence is corrected to remove redundancy and improve clarity.

× And whenever I have important things, I used to mark the date.

✓ And whenever I have important things, I mark the date.

The phrase 'I used to mark the date' implies a past habit, but the context suggests a current habit. Therefore, present tense 'I mark the date' is appropriate.

× Yes, sometimes when I go out, I forget to bring my phone from where I can pay for the things which I'm buying in the market.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I go out, I forget to bring my phone to pay for the things I'm buying in the market.

The phrase 'from where I can pay' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' indicating purpose. Also, 'which I'm buying' is better as 'I'm buying' without 'which' for smoother flow.

× So I need to have a phone, but I forget during that time when I was pretty busy.

✓ So I need to have a phone, but I forgot during that time when I was pretty busy.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past time reference 'when I was pretty busy'.

× I need to remember small things like eating apple in the morning as uh, I regularly eats uh, one apple a day.

✓ I need to remember small things like eating an apple in the morning as I regularly eat one apple a day.

The noun 'apple' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'an'. The verb 'eats' should be 'eat' to agree with the subject 'I'.

× So uh, I sometimes I forgot to remem, forgot to eat apple and when I go to Co when I go to the class and I forgot to bring my apples.

✓ So sometimes I forget to eat an apple and when I go to class, I forget to bring my apples.

The verb tense should be present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. Also, 'eat apple' should be 'eat an apple' for singular countable noun. 'Go to Co when I go to the class' is corrected to 'go to class' for clarity.

× I would remember the important things by writing down on my phone or asking one of my friend to remind me for that.

✓ I remember important things by writing them down on my phone or asking one of my friends to remind me of them.

The phrase 'writing down on my phone' needs an object 'them'. 'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' (plural). 'Remind me for that' should be 'remind me of them' for correct preposition and pronoun use.

× And sometimes they also forget to remind me.

✓ And sometimes they also forget to remind me.

This sentence is correct as it is in present tense to describe habitual action; no correction needed.

× So I particularly I particularly send them message to remind me or give a missed call about something which I can forget in the later days or in the past.

✓ So I particularly send them messages to remind me or give a missed call about something I might forget later on.

'Send them message' should be 'send them messages' (plural). 'Which I can forget in the later days or in the past' is awkward; corrected to 'something I might forget later on' for clarity and correct tense.