Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽고 기본 구조를 갖추었으나, 'I just hurt' 부분이 문맥상 부적절하며, 구체적인 예시나 이유가 부족합니다. 또한, 문장 연결이 매끄럽지 않아 더 논리적인 흐름을 위해 연결어 사용을 권장합니다.

Ejemplo: Unfortunately, I am not very good at memorizing things nowadays. Although I used to be better at it when I was younger, I often forget important details now. For instance, I can't remember my family's phone numbers except for my own. This makes daily communication a bit challenging.

Sugerencia: 답변이 구체적인 예시를 포함하고 있으며 자연스럽지만, 문장 사이에 연결어를 사용하여 더 논리적이고 유창한 흐름을 만드는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장 길이를 적절히 조절하여 명확성을 높일 수 있습니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed the due date for a utility bill, and I have also forgotten my wallet or umbrella several times. Most recently, I forgot the password to my front door, so I had to call my younger siblings for help.

Sugerencia: 답변이 명확하고 구체적인 이유를 포함하여 잘 구성되어 있습니다. 다만, 문장 간 연결어를 추가하여 더 자연스럽고 논리적인 흐름을 만들면 좋겠습니다.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, but the most important is my payday because that's when my bank account balance is at its highest. Additionally, I must remember my family's birthdays; otherwise, they might feel upset if I forget.

Sugerencia: 답변이 일관되지만, 일부 문장 구조가 부자연스럽고 문법 오류가 있습니다('mark it be on the calendar' 등). 문장 연결어를 사용하고 문법을 교정하여 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 것이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I used to write notes in my diary, but I don't check it often anymore. Therefore, I now register important events on my phone, which alerts me with an alarm a day or an hour before. If something is really important, I share it with others or mark it clearly on my calendar.

× I just hurt.

✓ I just get hurt.

The sentence 'I just hurt.' is incorrect because 'hurt' here is used as a verb but lacks the correct form to express the intended meaning. The student likely means 'I just get hurt' or 'I just feel hurt.' Using 'get hurt' correctly conveys the state of being hurt. The original sentence is incomplete and confusing.

× I cannot remember my family's phone numbers aside from my own ones.

✓ I cannot remember my family's phone numbers aside from my own.

The phrase 'my own ones' is incorrect because 'ones' is unnecessary when referring to 'my own phone number.' The pronoun 'ones' is redundant here. The correct phrase is 'my own' to refer to one's own phone number.

× I have forgotten utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet or umbrella a few times.

✓ I have forgotten the utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet or umbrella a few times.

When referring to specific known items like 'utility bill due dates,' the definite article 'the' should be used. Omitting 'the' makes the sentence less precise. Therefore, 'the utility bill due dates' is correct.

× The most memorable thing recently was when I forgot the front door password and had to call my younger siblings.

✓ The most memorable thing recently was when I forgot the front door's password and had to call my younger siblings.

The phrase 'the front door password' is awkward. Using the possessive form 'front door's password' is more natural and grammatically correct in English.

× There are many things I need to remember in my daily life, but among them, I absolutely must remember my payday.

✓ There are many things I need to remember in my daily life, but among them, I absolutely must remember the payday.

'Payday' is a specific day each month, so it should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify which payday is being referred to.

× This is because this is the day when my bank account balance is the highest.

✓ This is because this is the day when my bank account balance is highest.

The superlative 'highest' does not require the definite article 'the' when used after 'is' in this context. Omitting 'the' is more natural here.

× If it's really important, I try to share it with people and me or mark it be on the calendar.

✓ If it's really important, I try to share it with people and myself or mark it on the calendar.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect here; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used when the subject and object are the same person. Also, 'mark it be on the calendar' is incorrect; it should be 'mark it on the calendar.'