Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有點重複，且語句不夠流暢。建議避免重複表達相同意思，並使用連接詞使句子更自然且有邏輯。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, at work, I always take notes because I tend to forget the next steps quickly after checking the website.

Sugerencia: 回答中有語言錯誤和不完整的句子，建議注意語法正確性並避免重複或不完整的表達。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which was embarrassing because she always remembers mine every year.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重複詞語且缺乏連接詞，建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並避免重複。

Ejemplo: I need to remember several things daily, such as my work notes and tasks like writing scripts and planning my schedule.

Sugerencia: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複，建議使用正確時態和避免重複，並用連接詞使句子更自然。

Ejemplo: I usually make a to-do list before going to sleep so that I can remember important tasks for the next day.

× No, I'm not really good. I'm not really good at memorizing things.

✓ No, I'm not really good. I'm not really good at memorising things.

The student used 'memorizing' which is the American English spelling. Since the examiner used 'memorising' (British English), it is better to keep consistency in spelling style. Both are correct, but consistency is preferred.

× Yes I do. For instance, I once forgot my best for best friend best friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, I do. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday.

The phrase 'my best for best friend best friend's birthday' is incorrect and redundant. The correct possessive form is 'my best friend's birthday'. The extra words 'for best friend' are unnecessary and cause confusion.

× I felt like I felt.

✓ I felt bad about it.

The sentence 'I felt like I felt' is incomplete and unclear. The student likely wanted to express feeling bad or upset. A clearer sentence is 'I felt bad about it.' This corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× There are a couple things I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ There are a couple of things I need to remember in my daily life.

The phrase 'a couple things' is missing the preposition 'of'. The correct expression is 'a couple of things'. This is a common collocation in English.

× For example my work notes and for example my my daily task like writing tasks, writing my scripts, play scripts and to do.

✓ For example, my work notes and my daily tasks like writing scripts, play scripts, and to-do lists.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear pronoun use. 'My my daily task' should be 'my daily tasks' to match plural form. Also, 'to do' should be 'to-do lists' for clarity. Adding commas improves readability.

× I tend to take To Do List before my sleep.

✓ I tend to make a To-Do List before I sleep.

The verb 'take' is incorrect with 'To-Do List'. The correct verb is 'make' or 'write'. Also, 'before my sleep' is unnatural; 'before I sleep' is better English usage.

× So at the day before the new day I would take some lists and so that I can remember, remem remember important things for the next days.

✓ So the day before, I make some lists so that I can remember important things for the next day.

'At the day before the new day' is awkward; 'the day before' is correct. 'I would take some lists' is incorrect; 'I make some lists' is better. 'Next days' should be singular 'next day' to refer to the immediate following day.