Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 기억력에 대한 자신의 경험을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성해야 합니다.

Ejemplo: No, I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I can only remember events from when I was 12 years old, while some of my friends can remember things from when they were younger.

Sugerencia: 문장이 어색하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 중요한 일을 잊은 경험을 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, last week I forgot the deadline to submit the form for my English grades.

Sugerencia: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 일상에서 기억해야 하는 중요한 일을 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I need to remember to take my medicine every day because I have some problems with my legs.

Sugerencia: 답변이 혼란스럽고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 중요한 일을 기억하는 방법을 구체적이고 논리적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: To remember important things, I write notes on my laptop. This helps me keep track of tasks and deadlines so I don't forget them.

× No, I am not because I have memories from 12 years old, but among my friends, some friends had memories from 7 years old.

✓ No, I am not because I have memories from when I was 12 years old, but among my friends, some had memories from when they were 7 years old.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'memories from 12 years old' which is not a proper expression. It should be 'memories from when I was 12 years old' to indicate the age at which the memories started. Also, 'some friends had memories' is better as 'some had memories' to avoid redundancy. The plural 'friends' is correct, but the phrase needs clarification for singular/plural consistency and proper expression.

× Yes, I have in. For example, in last week I forgot. I have forgotten about deadlines of to figure out the form of English grades.

✓ Yes, I have. For example, last week I forgot. I forgot about the deadlines to figure out the form for English grades.

The phrase 'I have in' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I have' or 'I have forgotten'. 'In last week' is incorrect; it should be 'last week'. The sentence 'I have forgotten about deadlines of to figure out the form of English grades' is awkward and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'I forgot about the deadlines to figure out the form for English grades.' The past tense 'forgot' is appropriate here.

× I need to remember taking up here, I regularly take a pill because I have some areas about my legs, so I should take a pill, you know?

✓ I need to remember to take my pills here regularly because I have some issues with my legs, so I should take a pill, you know?

The phrase 'remember taking up here' is incorrect; it should be 'remember to take my pills here'. 'Some areas about my legs' is unclear and should be 'some issues with my legs'. The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here.

× To remember important things, I take a memo on my laptop. When I do a memo, I can't remember the important thing and I can't see that on my laptop.

✓ To remember important things, I take notes on my laptop. When I don't take notes, I can't remember important things and I can't see them on my laptop.

The phrase 'take a memo on my laptop' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'take notes on my laptop'. Also, 'When I do a memo' is unclear and should be 'When I don't take notes'. The pronoun 'that' is vague and should be 'them' referring to important things. The preposition 'on' is correct here.