Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“have bad memory”应为“have a bad memory”，“in their life”不合适。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性，同时避免重复和冗长。

Ejemplo: Personally, I have a poor memory and often forget appointments and assignments. It makes me feel frustrated, and although I try to improve, I haven't succeeded yet.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够流畅，部分短语不自然，如“final time of the assignments”应为“deadline of assignments”，“forgot a very important exam of timing”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更清晰。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I often forget assignment deadlines and exam schedules. For instance, in high school, I once missed the start time of an important exam and had to rush to catch it.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构较长且有语法错误，如“University School student”应为“university student”，“but I often forget that but I always can finish it”重复且不够连贯。建议简化句子并使用连接词提高流畅度。

Ejemplo: Firstly, I need to remember important dates like my parents' birthdays. Also, as a university student, I have to keep track of guidelines and assignments. Although I sometimes forget them, I always manage to complete my work on time.

Sugerencia: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在重复和语法错误，如“which called MIMO”应为“called MIMO”，“do do”和“it it”重复。建议注意语法和避免重复，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I prefer using apps to help me remember important tasks. For example, I use an app called MIMO where I can write down what I need to do, and it reminds me when it's time to complete them.

× Personally I really have bad memory, I often forget something such as appointments and assignments in their life.

✓ Personally, I really have a bad memory; I often forget things such as appointments and assignments in my life.

这里“bad memory”前缺少冠词“a”，因为memory是可数名词，表示记忆力。"something"应改为复数形式"things"，因为后面列举了多个例子。"their life"应改为"my life"，因为说话人指的是自己的生活。

× It always make me feel annoyed but I'm trying to improve ability of that but it doesn't work.

✓ It always makes me feel annoyed, but I'm trying to improve that ability, though it doesn't work.

主语"It"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为"makes"。"improve ability of that"表达不自然，应改为"improve that ability"。句子中连接词使用不当，建议用逗号和"though"连接。

× Absolutely yes. I often forget the final time of the assignments and some timing of exams.

✓ Absolutely yes. I often forget the deadlines of assignments and the times of some exams.

"final time of the assignments"表达不准确，应该用"deadlines of assignments"更合适。"some timing of exams"应改为"the times of some exams"。这里时态无误，但表达更自然。

× For example, when I was a high school student, I forgot a very important exam of timing, but I rushed it.

✓ For example, when I was a high school student, I forgot the time of a very important exam, but I rushed to it.

"exam of timing"表达错误，应改为"time of an exam"。"rushed it"不完整，应该是"rushed to it"表示赶去参加考试。

× First off, I need to remember some important days for me such as my parents birthdays, plus I also need to remember some guidelines or assignments because I'm a University School student but I often forget that but I always can finish it.

✓ First off, I need to remember some important days for me such as my parents' birthdays. Plus, I also need to remember some guidelines or assignments because I'm a university student, but I often forget them, though I can always finish them.

"parents birthdays"应加所有格，改为"parents' birthdays"。"University School student"表达不自然，改为"university student"。"forget that"应改为复数"forget them"，对应前面的"guidelines or assignments"。"always can finish it"语序错误，应改为"can always finish them"。

× I prefer to use some apps which can help me remember important things.

✓ I prefer to use some apps that can help me remember important things.

关系代词"which"在限定性定语从句中用"that"更自然。这里不算严重错误，但建议改进。

× I only use an app which called MIMO.

✓ I only use an app called MIMO.

"which called MIMO"缺少谓语动词"is"，应改为"an app called MIMO"，这是固定表达。

× I can write something which I need to do do and it always can remind me when it it is a time to do it.

✓ I can write down things I need to do, and it always reminds me when it is time to do them.

"something which I need to do do"重复"do"，应去掉一个。"write something"改为"write down things"更自然。"it always can remind me"语序错误，应为"it always reminds me"。"when it it is a time to do it"重复"it"，且表达不自然，应改为"when it is time to do them"。