Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "I will forgot" should be "I sometimes forget." Also, avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like "But." Try to use linking words to improve coherence, such as "however" or "on the other hand."

Ejemplo: Whether I'm good at memorizing things depends on the situation. For example, I am good at remembering small details like numbers and messages. However, I sometimes forget big events, which frustrates my mom. Overall, I would say my memory is quite reliable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is detailed and mostly clear, but there are minor errors such as "the bit events" which should be "big events." Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "fortunately" more smoothly to enhance coherence. Avoid repeating words like "at that time."

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Earlier this July, I had to submit an arrival form for my summer camp, but because my phone wasn't working properly, I completely forgot about it. Fortunately, I managed to submit the form just in time and attended the camp without any problems. I learned my lesson to always keep important events on my schedule.

Sugerencia: Your answer is well-structured and detailed with good vocabulary. To improve, you could add linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like "overall and throughout the day."

Ejemplo: For me, it's important to remember to be grateful every day because my guidance teacher advised me to list 10 things I'm thankful for each morning. This habit helps me start the day with a positive mindset, so I feel less stressed and more productive throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest and clear, but there are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "every moments" should be "every moment," and "But all is efficient" is unclear. Try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to explain why this method works for you. Also, avoid informal phrases like "kinda funny" in formal speaking.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I remember important things by writing them down on my forearm or palm because I can see them throughout the day. This visual reminder helps me complete tasks efficiently.

× But sometimes I will forgot big events and my mom will be really frustrated.

✓ But sometimes I will forget big events and my mom will be really frustrated.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after the modal verb 'will', the base form of the verb 'forget' should be used. Using 'forgot' here is incorrect because modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb.

× I learned my lesson that I always should keep the bit events on my schedule.

✓ I learned my lesson that I should always keep the big events on my schedule.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the modal verb 'should' for correct word order. Also, 'bit events' is a typo and should be 'big events'. The sentence structure is improved by correcting these errors.

× This might sound immature and childish and kinda funny.

✓ This might sound immature, childish, and kind of funny.

The phrase 'kinda' is informal and should be replaced with 'kind of' for proper grammar. Also, commas are needed to separate adjectives in a list for clarity.

× Sometimes I remember things by writing them down on my forearm or my palm where I can see it every day while I'm doing stuff.

✓ Sometimes I remember things by writing them down on my forearm or my palm where I can see them every day while I'm doing stuff.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'things', which is plural. Therefore, 'them' should be used to agree in number with the plural antecedent.

× It is more visual and it reminds me every moments that I have to do this.

✓ It is more visual and it reminds me every moment that I have to do this.

The phrase 'every moments' is incorrect because 'every' is used with singular nouns. The correct phrase is 'every moment'. Also, 'every moment' is an adverbial phrase indicating frequency, so its placement is appropriate.

× But all is efficient.

✓ But all is efficient.

The sentence 'But all is efficient.' is grammatically correct but semantically unclear. It might be better to say 'But it is efficient overall.' However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, no change is needed here.