Memory— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Absolutely. I'm good at memorizing things. For example, when I have some unforgettable things, I will memorize it until today, and I think it is beneficial to me.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
To be honest, I never forget some significant things and when I when I have some important things, I will make a list in my form to avoid forget it.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Uh, something I need to remember in my daily life, such as, uh, my tasks and, uh, in my lecture and tutorials, uh, class and uh, the essays, uh, requirement, these things I will remember in my daily life.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I remember significant things during make, at least in my form 'cause my form is often with me and it is very convenient for myself to remember it. And in my daily life I often use this way.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且句子结构重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I tend to remember unforgettable experiences clearly because I often reflect on them, which helps me retain the information longer.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的时态和结构，同时避免重复。
Ejemplo: Honestly, I rarely forget important things because I usually make a list in my notebook to help me remember them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中充满了填充词，表达不流畅，且句子结构混乱。建议减少口头语，使用完整且连贯的句子，明确列举需要记住的事项。
Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks, lecture schedules, tutorial sessions, and essay requirements to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用清晰的句子结构，准确表达记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my notebook, which I always carry with me. This method is very convenient and helps me keep track of my tasks.
Gramática
× For example, when I have some unforgettable things, I will memorize it until today, and I think it is beneficial to me.
✓ For example, when I have some unforgettable things, I will memorize them until today, and I think it is beneficial to me.
这里的代词"it"指代前面的复数名词"things"，应使用复数形式"them"，以保持单复数一致。
× To be honest, I never forget some significant things and when I when I have some important things, I will make a list in my form to avoid forget it.
✓ To be honest, I never forget some significant things, and when I have some important things, I make a list in my form to avoid forgetting them.
"will"用于表示将来时，但这里描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时"make"。此外，"avoid forget it"中"forget"应使用动名词形式"forgetting"，且"it"应改为复数代词"them"，与前文复数名词一致。
× I remember significant things during make, at least in my form 'cause my form is often with me and it is very convenient for myself to remember it.
✓ I remember significant things by making notes, at least in my form, 'cause my form is often with me and it is very convenient for me to remember them.
"during make"搭配不当，应改为"by making"表示通过做某事。"for myself"用法不当，改为"for me"更自然。"it"指代复数名词，应改为"them"。
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