Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“I'm not pretty sure”应为“I’m not quite sure”，且回答较为重复和冗长。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: I'm not quite sure if I'm still good at memorizing things. When I was a child, I could easily remember texts, but now it has become a bit more difficult for me.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且有故事性，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达不够地道，如“book the hotel in”应为“book a hotel room”。建议使用更准确的短语并丰富句型。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot to book a hotel room for an important guest at an international conference I organized last September. Fortunately, my coworker reminded me a day before his arrival, so I managed to make the reservation in time.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和口语化表达，如“you know”多次出现，影响流畅性。建议减少口语填充词，增强句子连贯性和正式度。

Ejemplo: I'm not very organized, so I often forget trivial things. However, for important matters like lectures and classes I need to attend, I make sure to write them down to remember them clearly.

Sugerencia: 回答结尾不完整，且表达重复。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并使用更自然的连接词。

Ejemplo: As I mentioned earlier, I usually write important things down to remember them. For instance, I keep a list of lectures and classes I need to attend because missing them could negatively affect my studies.

× But nowadays, as I'm growing age, I'm not pretty sure if I'm good at memorizing things.

✓ But nowadays, as I'm growing older, I'm not pretty sure if I'm good at memorizing things.

这里的短语“growing age”不正确，应该用“growing older”表示“变老”。这是现在时态的表达问题。

× I organized a very important international conference September last year and I forgot to book hotel for a distinguished guest from Japan.

✓ I organized a very important international conference in September last year and I forgot to book a hotel for a distinguished guest from Japan.

在表示时间时，应该使用介词“in”来修饰“September last year”。另外，“book hotel”缺少冠词，应该是“book a hotel”。这是介词使用错误和冠词错误。

× Luckily my coworker reminded me the one day before his arrival so I could book the hotel in.

✓ Luckily my coworker reminded me one day before his arrival so I could book the hotel.

“reminded me the one day before”中“the”多余，应去掉；“book the hotel in”中“in”多余，应去掉。正确表达是“reminded me one day before”和“book the hotel”。这是介词使用错误。

× For example, I keep a list of those lectures and classes I need to attend because meeting them could affect my studies and bring me some troubles.

✓ For example, I keep a list of those lectures and classes I need to attend because missing them could affect my studies and bring me some troubles.

原句中“meeting them”用词错误，应该是“missing them”，表示“错过它们”。这是介词和词汇使用错误。