Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar errors and making the sentences more natural. For example, use 'organised' instead of 'organize' and 'the skill allows' instead of 'the skills allows'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising, especially when it comes to my lessons and theoretical subjects. For example, I can easily recall a shopping list after glancing at it once, which helps me stay organised and efficient. This skill allows me to retain information effectively and complete various tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Use past tense consistently (e.g., 'I had to explain' instead of 'I have to explain'). Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas. Try to avoid repetition and make your answer more concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my ID card at home, which was a crucial mistake because I had an interview at a well-known company for a software engineering position. It was very embarrassing as I had to explain the situation during security checks. From that experience, I learned to always double-check before leaving home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect sentences. For example, say 'I organise all my plans in advance, so I only need to glance at them once.' Avoid phrases like 'glance at once on the things' which are unnatural.

Ejemplo: Well, I don't have much to remember daily because I organise all my plans in advance. Therefore, I just need to glance at my schedule once, and there is no need to memorise anything further.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words properly. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'I usually have to just glance at once on the list.' Instead, say 'I usually just glance at my to-do list.'

Ejemplo: My memorising skills are quite good. Although I make a to-do list in advance, I usually just glance at it once to remember important tasks. For example, every day I quickly review my morning routine, so I don't need to memorise it in detail.

× The skills allows me to retain information effectively and complete various tasks.

✓ The skills allow me to retain information effectively and complete various tasks.

The subject 'skills' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' instead of 'allows' to agree in number.

× Yes, once I've forgotten my ID card at home.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my ID card at home.

The sentence refers to a specific past event, so simple past tense 'forgot' is appropriate instead of present perfect 'I've forgotten'.

× It was a very embarrassing moment because I have to explain security questions for forgetting my ID card at home.

✓ It was a very embarrassing moment because I had to explain security questions for forgetting my ID card at home.

The sentence describes a past event, so past tense 'had to' should be used instead of present tense 'have to'.

× I can easily recall a shopping list after glancing at once on it, which helps me stay organize and efficient.

✓ I can easily recall a shopping list after glancing at it once, which helps me stay organized and efficient.

The phrase 'glancing at once on it' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'glancing at it once'. Also, 'organize' should be 'organized' as an adjective here.

× which helps me stay organize and efficient.

✓ which helps me stay organized and efficient.

'Organize' is a verb; the correct adjective form here is 'organized' to describe the state of the person.

× I have already organised my all plans in advance, so I just have to glance at once on the things.

✓ I have already organised all my plans in advance, so I just have to glance at the things once.

'All' should come before 'my plans' and 'glance at once on the things' is incorrect; correct order is 'glance at the things once'.

× I just have to glance at once on the things.

✓ I just have to glance at the things once.

'Glance at once on the things' is incorrect; the correct preposition and word order is 'glance at the things once'.

× Although I make a list or A to do list in advance, but I usually have to just glance at once on the list.

✓ Although I make a list or a to-do list in advance, I usually just have to glance at the list once.

The phrase 'glance at once on the list' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'glance at the list once'. Also, 'but' is redundant after 'although'.

× Although I make a list or A to do list in advance, but I usually have to just glance at once on the list.

✓ Although I make a list or a to-do list in advance, I usually just have to glance at the list once.

'Although' and 'but' should not be used together; one conjunction is enough to connect the clauses.

× For example, I on daily basis I just glance my morning routine and there is no need to memorize further or remember the thing.

✓ For example, on a daily basis, I just glance at my morning routine and there is no need to memorize further or remember the thing.

'On daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'glance' requires the preposition 'at' before the object.