Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“telephones ID card”应为“telephone numbers and ID cards”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意名词复数和冠词的使用，避免拼写错误，并使表达更简洁流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, especially numbers. For example, I can easily remember telephone numbers, ID cards, and passwords. However, when it comes to paragraphs or speeches, I need to read them several times to memorize.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“forget”应为过去式“forgot”，且部分表达不够地道。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot to bring my exam admission ticket and only realized it when I arrived at the exam center. I had to rush back home to get it, and I almost missed the bus.

Sugerencia: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，如“what my class”不完整，且“expressions”用词不当。建议明确表达需要记住的具体事项，避免语法错误，并使用恰当词汇。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule and when each class starts. I also have to remember tasks like topping up my phone credit, doing my part-time job duties, and cleaning the house.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“load apps”不明确，“end the notification”用词错误。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达，并合理使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Most of the time, I add important tasks to my phone apps, such as the calendar or reminder apps. These apps send me notifications so I don't forget anything important. I especially like using the calendar because it can notify me at the right time.

× I can remember telephones ID card and my password easily, but when it comes to non paragraph or speech I need to read it several times.

✓ I can remember telephone numbers, ID cards, and my password easily, but when it comes to non-paragraphs or speeches, I need to read them several times.

这里“telephones”应为复数形式“telephone numbers”，表示电话号码；“ID card”应为复数“ID cards”，表示多张身份证；“non paragraph or speech”应改为复数形式“non-paragraphs or speeches”，因为后文用复数代词“them”。需要注意名词的单复数形式。

× Yes, I remember once I forget to bring my exam admission ticket and I realized it until I reached at the exam center.

✓ Yes, I remember once I forgot to bring my exam admission ticket and I realized it only when I reached the exam center.

这里“forget”应使用过去式“forgot”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情；“until I reached at the exam center”中“at”多余，应去掉；“only when”更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, I remember once I forget to bring my exam admission ticket and I realized it until I reached at the exam center.

✓ Yes, I remember once I forgot to bring my exam admission ticket and I realized it only when I reached the exam center.

“reached at the exam center”中“at”是不正确的介词搭配，动词“reach”后直接跟地点名词即可，不需要“at”。

× Well I need to remember what my class and when they start and there are also many expressions I need to remember such as during in the part time job or top up my phone credit card or remember to clean the house.

✓ Well, I need to remember what my classes are and when they start, and there are also many expressions I need to remember, such as during my part-time job, topping up my phone credit card, or remembering to clean the house.

“during in the part time job”中“during”和“in”不能连用，应去掉“in”；“part time job”应加连字符为“part-time job”；“top up”作为动名词时应改为“topping up”；“remember to clean”应改为“remembering to clean”，保持结构一致。

× Well I need to remember what my class and when they start and there are also many expressions I need to remember such as during in the part time job or top up my phone credit card or remember to clean the house.

✓ Well, I need to remember what my classes are and when they start, and there are also many expressions I need to remember, such as during my part-time job, topping up my phone credit card, or remembering to clean the house.

“what my class”应为复数“what my classes”，因为后文用“they start”，指多个课程。

× And also I like to use the calendar because it can end the notification at the same time.

✓ And also I like to use the calendar because it can send the notification at the same time.

“end the notification”中的“end”用错了，正确动词应为“send”，表示发送通知。