Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更流畅。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget words I have just learned. For example, last week I struggled to remember some English vocabulary.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，避免重复，并具体说明感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as my family members' birthdays. This makes me feel very upset because I care about them a lot.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不自然。建议完整回答问题，使用正确的语法，并补充更多具体细节。

Ejemplo: During the semester, I need to remember the schedule of my classes so that I can attend them on time. Besides that, I also have to remember deadlines for assignments.

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但有些语法错误和用词不当。建议注意单复数和词汇搭配，使表达更准确。

Ejemplo: I usually set reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks. For instance, when I am ill, these reminders ensure I take my medicine on time.

× Before one week ago, so it's hard for me to remember the English word.

✓ A week ago, it was hard for me to remember English words.

句中时间状语“Before one week ago”表达不自然，应改为“A week ago”。同时，时态应使用过去时，且“word”应为复数形式“words”，因为通常记忆的是多个单词。

× Yes and this problem make me very down and I don't know how to improve it.

✓ Yes, and this problem makes me very down and I don't know how to improve it.

主语是单数“this problem”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× For example sometimes I will forgot my family members family members birthday and I will feel really sad about that.

✓ For example, sometimes I forget my family members' birthdays and I feel really sad about that.

“will forgot”时态错误，应为一般现在时“forget”，因为描述习惯性动作。且“family members family members birthday”重复，应改为“family members' birthdays”，表示复数所有格。

× While during the semester I require to memorize the time of each classes to join the courses on time and also I need to remember hmm.

✓ During the semester, I need to memorize the time of each class to attend the courses on time, and also I need to remember other things.

“require to memorize”用法不当，应改为“need to memorize”。“each classes”中“classes”应为单数“class”，因为“each”后接单数名词。

× Well, I think setting reminders on phone can be extremely helpful. That can let you know what time you need to do something.

✓ Well, I think setting reminders on the phone can be extremely helpful. They can let you know what time you need to do something.

“on phone”缺少冠词，应为“on the phone”。“That”指代不明确，复数应使用“They”。

× For example, if I am ill, those note can help me to eat the medicine punctually.

✓ For example, if I am ill, those notes can help me take the medicine punctually.

“those note”应为复数“those notes”。“eat the medicine”用词错误，应为“take the medicine”。