Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, instead of "I'm not fully good at memorizing things," say "I'm not very good at memorizing things." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I always remember important information that interests me. To avoid forgetting, I usually write notes on my phone or on paper as a backup.

Sugerencia: Your answer tells a clear story but could be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid repeating words like "about about" and try to be more concise. Also, add a concluding sentence to wrap up your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my room key and locked myself out. My wife and I had to wait for about an hour for the house owner to bring a spare key. It was a frustrating experience that taught me to be more careful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains an irrelevant phrase "like a thorough orangutan." Focus on clear, relevant details and avoid unrelated expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: In daily life, I need to remember to maintain a healthy diet and exercise regularly because these habits keep me energetic and fit throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words like "so there." Use proper sentence structure and finish your thoughts. Also, use linking words to explain your method logically.

Ejemplo: I sometimes forget important things, so to prevent this, I write notes on my phone or on paper. My phone also reminds me a day in advance, which helps me keep track of important tasks.

× No, I'm not fully good at memorizing things, but some important things which I'm really interested of, I keep it in my mind and sometimes just in case if I forget, I keep a note for myself either in my phone or write it somewhere.

✓ No, I'm not fully good at memorizing things, but some important things which I'm really interested in, I keep in my mind and sometimes, just in case I forget, I keep a note for myself either on my phone or write it somewhere.

The phrase 'interested of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'interested in'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' because we use 'on' for devices. Additionally, 'just in case if I forget' is redundant; 'just in case I forget' is correct.

× Yes, there was an occasion that I forgot my room key and I locked myself out and I had to call house owner to get the keys and me and my wife were standing and waiting for him about about one hour and this is something I forgot.

✓ Yes, there was an occasion when I forgot my room key and locked myself out. I had to call the house owner to get the keys, and my wife and I were standing and waiting for him for about one hour. This is something I forgot.

The phrase 'there was an occasion that' should be 'there was an occasion when'. 'Me and my wife' should be 'my wife and I' as the subject. 'About about' is a repetition error. Also, 'call house owner' needs the definite article 'the' before 'house owner'. The sentence was long and run-on, so it was split for clarity.

× In our daily life, we shouldn't forget to keep our diet and exercise every day because this will keep us very healthy and energetic throughout the day. And then like a thorough orangutan.

✓ In our daily life, we shouldn't forget to maintain our diet and exercise every day because this will keep us very healthy and energetic throughout the day. And then, like a thorough orangutan.

The phrase 'keep our diet' is awkward; 'maintain our diet' is more appropriate. The sentence 'And then like a thorough orangutan.' is unclear and seems incomplete or incorrect; however, since it is part of the original, only minor punctuation was added. The preposition issue is mainly with 'keep our diet'.

× Sometimes it forgets important things, so there. So in order to avoid this, I note it down on the my phone or write it somewhere so I can keep it safe and the my phone will remind me before one day so that I can keep a track on it. So it's in what most important thing is you have a.

✓ Sometimes I forget important things, so to avoid this, I note them down on my phone or write them somewhere so I can keep them safe. My phone will remind me a day before so that I can keep track of it. So, the most important thing is to have a system.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'it forgets' should be 'I forget' as the subject is the speaker. 'On the my phone' should be 'on my phone' (remove 'the'). 'Before one day' should be 'a day before'. 'Keep a track on it' should be 'keep track of it'. The last sentence is incomplete and unclear; it was corrected to a meaningful statement. Overall, the sentence structure was confusing and needed rephrasing for clarity.