Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then explain briefly with clear and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. During my schooling under the Central Board of Secondary Education, we focused more on practical and methodological learning rather than rote memorisation, so I didn't develop strong memorising skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but needs better structure and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example with linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once forgot my father's birthday because I was lazy and did not keep a schedule, which made him very anxious and disappointed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'yeah'. Use complete sentences and explain your points with linking words.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember the importance of confidence and perseverance because sometimes I feel low and tend to overthink, which affects my motivation.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use clear and correct sentences, and explain your methods with linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Ejemplo: I usually mark important events in my Google Calendar. Alternatively, I use a Google Excel sheet to organise my schedule, which is very helpful in emergencies and for managing daily tasks.

× Initially from my schooling, I haven't learned the art of memorizing because I was in the Central Board of Secondary Education, which in terms of CBSE, we had practical and methodi methodological learning.

✓ Initially from my schooling, I haven't learned the art of memorizing because I am in the Central Board of Secondary Education, which in terms of CBSE, we have practical and methodological learning.

The sentence mixes present perfect tense 'haven't learned' with past tense 'was' and 'had'. Since the student is referring to an ongoing or recent experience, present tense 'am' and 'have' should be used to maintain consistency and correctness.

× One such instances as I have forgotten my father's birthday and he was very anxious and excited about his birth.

✓ One such instance is that I have forgotten my father's birthday and he was very anxious and excited about his birthday.

The phrase 'One such instances' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun 'instance'. Also, 'birth' should be 'birthday' to correctly refer to the occasion.

× I usually market at. I usually market in my Google Calendar, else I would use a Google Excel sheet for my schedule which is really essential and helpful in times of emergency or in our day-to-day life.

✓ I usually mark it in my Google Calendar; otherwise, I use a Google Excel sheet for my schedule, which is really essential and helpful in times of emergency or in our day-to-day life.

The phrase 'I usually market at' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct verb is 'mark' and the sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Else' is better replaced with 'otherwise' for formal usage.