Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，如“memory things things”，建议注意动词形式和避免重复。此外，句子结构较为松散，缺少连贯的连接词。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I use apps like Notion to note important information. Besides, I have a habit of keeping a diary, which also helps me remember things better.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，注意时态和主谓一致。

Ejemplo: I rarely forget important things, but I once missed an important meeting, which made my friends very upset.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够流畅，部分词汇使用不准确，如“courses time”和“similar”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I need to remember many things daily. For example, as a graduate student, I have to keep track of my class and tutorial schedules. Besides, I must remember assignment deadlines and homework tasks.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“always and I also”，且句子较长不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，注意单复数和动词形式，避免重复。

Ejemplo: I use a convenient app called Notion to record important things in my life. Besides, I have a habit of keeping a diary, which also helps me remember important matters.

× I think I am the kind of people who can memory things things very well because I have to use some apps like Notion to notice the important things in my life.

✓ I think I am the kind of person who can memorize things very well because I have to use some apps like Notion to notice the important things in my life.

people是复数，前面用的是单数的kind of，应该用单数person。memory是名词，动词形式应为memorize。

× And besides that I always have a habit to keep in diary that you can also help me memorizing something.

✓ And besides that I always have a habit of keeping a diary that can also help me memorize something.

动词短语中，习惯后面应接动名词形式，keep in diary应为keep a diary，memorizing应为动词原形memorize。

× Seldom I have to say, but this remember a lot of time I forgotten an important meeting and my friends is really sad that time.

✓ I have to say seldom, but I remember many times I have forgotten an important meeting and my friends were really sad at that time.

时态混乱，remember应为现在时，forgotten应为过去完成时或过去时，friends是复数，谓语应为were。

× my friends is really sad that time.

✓ my friends were really sad at that time.

friends是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式were。

× I often use that apps to recording my important things in my life.

✓ I often use that app to record my important things in my life.

apps是复数，前面用that应为单数app，recording应为动词原形record。

× I often use that apps to recording my important things in my life.

✓ I often use that app to record my important things in my life.

动词不定式to后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式recording。

× I have to remember my courses time and similar and tutorials time.

✓ I have to remember my course times and tutorials times.

courses和tutorials是复数，time应使用复数形式times。