Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No, because I in the school I always forget the knowledge point and I English. So I can't recalls the world.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
No, because I have a plan what to do this day so I don't have forgotten something important.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I need to remember do everything I never say never and never give up and touching and learning. In daily life.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
And I will plan what you do for the day. So important things first.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 你的回答语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议简洁明了地回答问题,并用简单句子说明原因。
Ejemplo: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I learn at school, especially English vocabulary.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中时态和语法错误较多,建议使用正确的时态,并且表达更自然。
Ejemplo: No, I have never forgotten something important because I always make a plan for my day.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱,建议明确列举日常需要记住的具体事项,并用连词连接句子。
Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my tasks, stay positive, never give up, and keep learning new things.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误,建议完整表达如何记忆重要事情,并使用连词使句子连贯。
Ejemplo: I remember important things by planning my day and prioritizing the most important tasks first.
× No, because I in the school I always forget the knowledge point and I English.
✓ No, because at school I always forget the knowledge points and English.
句子结构混乱,缺少介词'at',且'nknowledge point'应为复数形式。应调整句子顺序使其更通顺。
× So I can't recalls the world.
✓ So I can't recall the words.
动词'recalls'与主语'I'不匹配,第一人称单数应使用'recall'。另外,'world'应为'words',符合语境。
× No, because I have a plan what to do this day so I don't have forgotten something important.
✓ No, because I have a plan for what to do today, so I haven't forgotten anything important.
时态使用错误,'don't have forgotten'应为现在完成时的否定形式'haven't forgotten'。另外,'this day'应为'today',并且句子结构需调整。
× I need to remember do everything I never say never and never give up and touching and learning. In daily life.
✓ I need to remember to do everything, never say never, never give up, keep touching and learning in daily life.
缺少不定式'to','remember do'应为'remember to do'。'touching'用法不当,应为'keep touching'或改为其他表达。句子断句不合理,需调整。
× And I will plan what you do for the day. So important things first.
✓ I will plan what to do for the day, so I do important things first.
句子结构不完整,'what you do'应为'what to do',并且两个句子应合并为一个完整句子。