Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, такие как "touched me illogical things". Рекомендуется использовать более простые и понятные фразы, а также избегать повторов. Попробуйте структурировать ответ с четким вступлением и поддерживающими деталями.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. Since childhood, my parents encouraged me to play logical games, which helped improve my memory skills.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений, например, "where is the kale home". Рекомендуется использовать простые предложения, избегать повторов и давать конкретные примеры с правильной структурой.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot where I parked my car, which caused me some trouble.

Sugerencia: Ваш ответ достаточно ясен, но есть повтор слова "house" и можно добавить связующие слова для лучшей связности. Также можно использовать более разнообразную лексику для описания повседневных задач.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I always remember to take my house keys to avoid getting locked out. Additionally, I keep track of my schedule to manage my time effectively and not miss any important appointments.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Ejemplo: That's an interesting question. I usually try to recall the events of my day carefully, which helps me remember important things.

× I'm very good in memorizing things because from my childhood my parents touched me illogical things and we we played a lot of logical games and I think it make me more memorable person.

✓ I'm very good at memorizing things because since my childhood my parents exposed me to illogical things and we played a lot of logical games and I think it makes me a more memorable person.

The phrase 'good in memorizing' should be 'good at memorizing' because 'good at' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'From my childhood' is better expressed as 'since my childhood' to indicate a time period starting in the past. 'Touched me illogical things' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'exposed me to illogical things' to indicate experience. 'We we played' has a repeated word, corrected to 'we played'. 'I think it make me' should be 'I think it makes me' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'More memorable person' needs an article 'a' before it.

× For example, I forgotten where is the kale home and we can we can get.

✓ For example, I forgot where the kale home is and where we can get it.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb; here, simple past 'forgot' is correct. The sentence structure 'where is the kale home' should be 'where the kale home is' in indirect question form. The phrase 'and we can we can get' is repetitive and incomplete; corrected to 'and where we can get it' for clarity.

× I always need to remember to take my house house keys with me because I don't want to get locked out.

✓ I always need to remember to take my house keys with me because I don't want to get locked out.

The phrase 'house house keys' contains a repeated word; it should be 'house keys'. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× It's a interesting question.

✓ It's an interesting question.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'interesting'.

× I never think about it, but when I forgot about something I tried to sit and rolled in my mind what happens in my day and so that I I can remember important things.

✓ I never think about it, but when I forget something I try to sit and roll in my mind what happened in my day so that I can remember important things.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' to match 'never think'. 'Tried' should be 'try' to maintain present tense. 'Rolled' should be 'roll' to match 'try'. 'What happens' should be 'what happened' to refer to past events. The repeated 'I' is removed for clarity.