Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding hesitations and unclear phrases. Use a direct topic sentence and support it with specific details. For example, avoid phrases like "I'm kind of apartment persons" which is unclear. Also, reduce filler words such as "umm" and repeated words like "I'm, I'm."

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things quickly. Usually, I need to see something several times before I can remember it properly, so I often forget things at first glance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense usage. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, last week when I was out with my friends, I forgot my keys on the desk at a coffee house. When I got home, I realised this and had to go back to collect them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors such as "due days"; instead, say "deadlines."

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember all my deadlines because I am an English teacher. For instance, next week I have to finish an outline for my lesson plan, which is very important.

Sugerencia: Try to use the correct tense and avoid repetition. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by structuring it clearly with a topic sentence and supporting detail, using linking words.

Ejemplo: I usually remember important things by writing down all my tasks in a notebook. For example, at the start of each day, I list everything I need to do, which helps me stay organised.

× I'm kind of apartment persons.

✓ I'm kind of an absent-minded person.

The phrase 'apartment persons' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The student likely meant 'absent-minded person', which means someone who forgets things easily. Also, 'kind of' should be followed by a singular noun here, so 'an absent-minded person' is correct.

× I don't have a habit of remembering everything at the first glance, so that's why I usually forget the things just after I have seen it, uh, several times.

✓ I don't have the habit of remembering everything at first glance, so that's why I usually forget things just after I have seen them several times.

The phrase 'a habit' is acceptable but 'the habit' fits better here as it refers to a specific habit. 'At the first glance' should be 'at first glance' as it is an idiomatic expression. 'The things' should be 'things' because it is general. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'things'.

× I remember that last week when I hang out with my friends and it turns out I forgot my keys on the desk of the coffee house and when I came home I remember that and I have to come back to take my keys.

✓ I remember that last week when I hung out with my friends and it turned out I forgot my keys on the desk of the coffee house, and when I came home I remembered that and had to come back to take my keys.

The verb 'hang out' should be in past tense 'hung out' to match the past time reference 'last week'. 'Turns out' should be 'turned out' for past tense consistency. 'Remember' should be 'remembered' to maintain past tense. 'Have to come back' should be 'had to come back' to keep past tense.

× I need to remember all of my deadlines because I am an English teacher, so I have many due days to complete.

✓ I need to remember all of my deadlines because I am an English teacher, so I have many deadlines to meet.

The phrase 'due days to complete' is awkward and incorrect. 'Deadlines to meet' is the correct collocation. 'Many due days' is not a standard phrase.

× I had an habit of writing down all the tasks that I need to complete in my notebook, and I think it's a it's very help me, it's very helpful.

✓ I have a habit of writing down all the tasks that I need to complete in my notebook, and I think it's very helpful.

The phrase 'had an habit' is incorrect; 'habit' begins with a consonant sound, so it should be 'a habit'. Also, the tense should be present 'have' to match the ongoing habit. The phrase 'it's a it's very help me' is ungrammatical and should be 'it's very helpful'.