Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples with linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete thoughts.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself good at memorizing things because I prefer to keep information in my mind rather than writing it down. For example, when I go shopping, I never make a list; instead, I remember all the items I need. This method helps me stay focused and organized.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a direct answer first, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete.

Ejemplo: No, I have never forgotten anything very important because I always keep myself organized. For instance, I use various techniques to boost my memory, such as making mental notes and staying focused on my tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by reducing filler words like 'umm' and by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as birthdays of my loved ones, upcoming exams, family outings, and group meetings. Remembering these helps me stay connected and prepared.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid awkward expressions like 'I used to' when referring to current habits.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by writing them down in my diary and setting alarms or calendar reminders. For example, I usually set an alert one hour before an event to make sure I don't forget it.

× I always wo I always prefer to keep things in my mind.

✓ I always prefer to keep things in my mind.

The sentence contains a repetition and incomplete phrase 'I always wo I always'. This is a sentence structure error where the sentence is not properly formed. Removing the repeated and incomplete part corrects the sentence.

× whenever I go for the shopping

✓ whenever I go shopping

The phrase 'go for the shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'for the'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× never forget anything as well as a as my mother said, I am good at memorizing, but.

✓ never forget anything, as my mother said, I am good at memorizing.

The phrase 'as well as a as' is incorrect and redundant. Also, the sentence ends with 'but' without continuation, which is incorrect conjunction use. Removing 'as well as a as' and 'but' corrects the sentence.

× I've forgotten something very important because I, as I mentioned earlier, I am a sharp minded person, sharp minded person.

✓ I haven't forgotten anything very important because, as I mentioned earlier, I am a sharp minded person.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I've forgotten' which contradicts the intended meaning. The student means they have not forgotten anything important. Changing to 'I haven't forgotten' corrects the past tense usage.

× I always keep my uh, self organized and on track and I boost my memory with a lot of other things, which.

✓ I always keep myself organized and on track and I boost my memory with a lot of other things.

The reflexive pronoun 'my self' is incorrectly separated and should be 'myself'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'which' without continuation, which is incorrect sentence structure.

× there are a lot of things which I think we need to remember in our routine, such as I can say birthdays of our special ones and umm, any exam or any important days whenever we want to go outside with our family and any group meetings, et cetera.

✓ There are many things that I think we need to remember in our routine, such as birthdays of our special ones, any exams or important days, whenever we want to go outside with our family, and any group meetings, etc.

The phrase 'a lot of things which I think we need to remember in our routine, such as I can say birthdays' is awkward and redundant. Using 'many things that' is more appropriate. Also, 'any exam or any important days' should be pluralized consistently as 'any exams or important days'. The sentence is improved for clarity and correct quantifier use.

× I used to remember important things in a certain way, such as I have my own diary on which I note everything and written down to remember everything as well as I set alarm or the calendar the day before any event which reminds me one hour earlier.

✓ I remember important things in a certain way, such as having my own diary on which I note everything down to remember, as well as setting an alarm or calendar reminder the day before any event, which reminds me one hour earlier.

The phrase 'I used to remember' suggests a past habit, but the context implies a current habit, so 'I remember' is better. 'Written down' is incorrectly used; it should be 'note everything down'. Also, 'I set alarm or the calendar' is incorrect; it should be 'setting an alarm or calendar reminder'. These corrections fix verb form and article usage.