Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子，使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: I am not very good at memorising things. I often have to repeat them many times and write to-do lists to help me remember important tasks.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，‘make a bride’应为‘make a bread’，句子不完整且缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子并注意词汇准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Last week, my father was baking bread and asked me to pay attention while he took a phone call, but I forgot what he said.

Sugerencia: 回答中句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确列举需要记住的事项，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember assignment deadlines, dentist appointments, and important birthdays of my family and friends.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点且较为清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I use a To-Do List to remember important things. By writing everything down, I can avoid forgetting tasks on busy days.

× I had to memorize some things to repeat much times and I must write some to do lists to keep my mind on this important things.

✓ I had to memorize some things to repeat many times and I must write some to-do lists to keep my mind on these important things.

这里“much times”应改为“many times”，因为“times”是可数名词，需用“many”；“this important things”应改为“these important things”，因为“things”是复数，指示代词应使用复数形式“these”。

× he asked me to attention, pay attention to.

✓ he asked me to pay attention.

“ask someone to attention”是不正确的表达，正确用法是“ask someone to pay attention”，即“要求某人注意”。

× Some important birthdays whose.

✓ Some important birthdays.

句子不完整，“whose”用法错误，应去掉。

× I need to pay more attention to the deadline of assignments from my school and the time when I had to visit my dentist.

✓ I need to pay more attention to the deadlines of assignments from my school and the time when I have to visit my dentist.

“deadline”应为复数“deadlines”，因为有多个作业截止时间；“had to visit”时态不对，应为现在时“have to visit”，因为是日常需要记住的事情。

× I can write them all in my To Do List, avoid forgetting them some days.

✓ I can write them all in my To-Do List to avoid forgetting them on some days.

“avoid forgetting them some days”缺少介词，应为“avoid forgetting them on some days”，表示“在某些日子避免忘记”。