Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma bhul haru chan jasle gardaa English naturalness ra clarity ma asar parcha. Tapai le 'got so panic' bhanda 'I panic easily' bhannu parcha ra 'you have a habit' bhanda 'I have a habit' bhannu parcha. Arko kura, tapai ko uttar dherai lamo ra thulo sentence haru chan, jasle gardaa clarity ma kami aauchha. Tapai le chhoto ra spashta sentence haru prayog garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I am not very good at memorizing things because I panic easily and tend to forget. Therefore, I usually make notes or use reminders to help me remember important information.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo bhul chan. 'I have usually have habit' bhanda 'I usually have a habit' bhannu parcha. 'Forgot my phone on my colleagues' bhanda 'forgot my phone at my colleague's place' bhannu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banayera bolnu parcha.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important, which was my phone. I usually have a habit of forgetting things, and last time I left my phone at my colleague's place. I realized it only after I got home.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma grammar ra vocabulary ko prayog ma kami cha. 'Making list' bhanda 'making a list' bhannu parcha. 'Schedule my daily habit of doing things' bhanda 'schedule my daily tasks' bhannu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banayera bolnu parcha.

Ejemplo: I think making a list helps me remember things in my daily life. For example, I keep a proper journal to schedule my daily tasks, which makes me more organized and productive.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo bhul chan. 'Before a day' bhanda 'the day before' bhannu parcha. 'Address all the important thing' bhanda 'note down all the important things' bhannu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banayera bolnu parcha.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I have started making a proper journal the day before so that I don't make mistakes the next day. I make sure to note down all the important things in my journal every day to stay productive.

× I am not so good on memorizing things because I got so panic and you have a habit of forgetting things.

✓ I am not so good at memorizing things because I get so panicked and I have a habit of forgetting things.

The correct preposition after 'good' is 'at', not 'on'. Also, 'got so panic' is incorrect; it should be 'get so panicked' to express the feeling properly. Additionally, 'you have a habit' should be 'I have a habit' to maintain subject consistency.

× So to get memorize something I have to make notes or even make thing to remember.

✓ So to memorize something I have to make notes or even make things to remember.

The phrase 'get memorize' is incorrect; it should be simply 'memorize'. Also, 'make thing' should be plural 'make things' to agree with the context.

× I have usually have habit of forgetting things that I put and last time I forgot my phone on my colleagues and when I came back home I got to know that I have forgot my phone to my colleague.

✓ I usually have a habit of forgetting things that I put down, and last time I forgot my phone at my colleague's place. When I came back home, I found out that I had forgotten my phone at my colleague's.

The sentence has multiple tense and preposition errors. 'Have usually have' is redundant; 'usually have' is correct. 'Forgot my phone on my colleagues' should be 'forgot my phone at my colleague's place' using correct preposition and possessive form. 'I have forgot' should be past perfect 'I had forgotten' to indicate the action happened before another past action.

× I think making list can help me to remember thing in my daily life, like making proper journal to schedule my daily habit of doing things that can make me more helpful.

✓ I think making a list can help me to remember things in my daily life, like making a proper journal to schedule my daily habits of doing things that can make me more helpful.

The sentence is missing articles before 'list' and 'proper journal'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'Habit' should be plural 'habits' as it refers to multiple daily activities.

× Like I make sure to address all the important thing to be noted on my journal every day so I can be productive.

✓ I make sure to address all the important things to be noted in my journal every day so I can be productive.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because 'all the important' refers to multiple items. Also, the correct preposition is 'in my journal' not 'on my journal'.