Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使用更准确的词汇表达记忆能力。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. Usually, I write down important tasks on my phone so I don't forget them, especially when preparing for tests.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较混乱，句子结构不完整，表达不连贯。建议使用清晰的时间顺序和因果关系，避免重复，增强表达的逻辑性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. Although I remembered it the day before and planned to send her a gift, I still forgot on the actual day. Fortunately, she forgave me.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用具体例子并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I need to remember many things daily. For example, as a graduate student, I have to check my job applications and keep up with my studies. Also, I prepare for tests like English exams and participate in volunteering activities.

Sugerencia: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显简单。建议丰富细节，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意介词和冠词的使用。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things on paper and carry it with me. Alternatively, I use the reminder app on my phone to check tasks whenever needed.

× I got a really bad memorizing ability, so most of the time I have to write down the things I'm gonna do in my phone too and check it out.

✓ I have a really bad memory, so most of the time I have to write down the things I'm going to do on my phone and check them.

这里“memorizing ability”用法不自然，应该用“memory”表示记忆力；“gonna”是口语缩写，正式写作应为“going to”；“in my phone”应改为“on my phone”；“check it out”不准确，应该用“check them”指代前面的事情。

× Always, uh, there will be a question when I prepare for my test especially I have to something to remember.

✓ There is always a question when I prepare for my test, especially when I have something to remember.

原句结构混乱，缺少动词，且“have to something”不正确，应为“have something”；调整句子结构使其更通顺。

× Yes I still remember I forgot one of my best friends birthday and before the day I just remember tomorrow is my birthday and I have to say happy birthday to her and send her birthday gift and at that day I just forgot.

✓ Yes, I still remember I forgot one of my best friend's birthdays. Before the day, I just remembered that tomorrow was her birthday and I had to say happy birthday to her and send her a birthday gift, but on that day I just forgot.

时态使用不一致，描述过去事件应使用过去时；“best friends birthday”应为“best friend's birthday”；“remember”应为过去式“remembered”；“have to”应为过去式“had to”；“at that day”应为“on that day”。

× I don't know why but however she forgive me.

✓ I don't know why, but however she forgave me.

“forgive”应使用过去式“forgave”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× There are a lot of things I'm gonna remember on my daily basis.

✓ There are a lot of things I have to remember on a daily basis.

“gonna remember”不符合语境，应使用“have to remember”表示必须记住；“on my daily basis”应为“on a daily basis”。

× For example, as a graduate student I have to remembering checking on my application on the job and the study I'm working on in my school.

✓ For example, as a graduate student, I have to check on my job applications and the studies I'm working on at my school.

“have to remembering checking”结构错误，应为“have to check”；“application on the job”应为“job applications”；“the study”应为复数“studies”；“in my school”应为“at my school”。

× Also the test I'm preparing for for example, like English and volunteering.

✓ Also, the tests I'm preparing for, for example, English and volunteering.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词；“test”应为复数“tests”；调整句子使其完整通顺。

× Most of the time I will write down in the papers and bring it with me anywhere, or just list it in my reminder of my cell phone to check it whenever I have to do something next.

✓ Most of the time, I write things down on paper and bring them with me anywhere, or just list them in the reminder on my cell phone to check whenever I have to do something next.

“write down in the papers”应为“write down on paper”；“bring it”应为“bring them”指代复数；“list it in my reminder of my cell phone”应为“list them in the reminder on my cell phone”；“Most of the time I will write”改为一般现在时“Most of the time, I write”更自然。