Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，同时可以增加一些具体的例子来支持观点。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things because it takes me a long time to remember articles. For example, I often spend hours trying to memorize a short text.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意冠词和时态的使用，同时可以用更自然的表达方式描述经历。

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my ID card when I was going to school. Because of that, I couldn't enter the school and had to run back home to get it, which made my morning very stressful.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但表达略显口语化且句子连接不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意表达的准确性。

Ejemplo: Firstly, I need to remember to do my homework because I sometimes get distracted by electronic devices. Also, I always try to brush my teeth before sleeping since it's good for dental health.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并增加细节使回答更具体。

Ejemplo: I usually remind myself about important things 20 minutes in advance. This helps me avoid forgetting them when I need to do something important.

× Yes, one day when I was going to the my school, I suddenly recalled that I forgot to bring my ID card which would makes me impossible to enter my school as a student.

✓ Yes, one day when I was going to my school, I suddenly recalled that I forgot to bring my ID card which would make it impossible for me to enter my school as a student.

“the my school”中“the”和“my”不能同时使用，应去掉“the”。“would makes”中“makes”应为原形“make”，因为情态动词“would”后接动词原形。句中“impossible to enter my school as a student”缺少主语，应加上“it”并调整为“make it impossible for me to enter my school as a student”。

× Yes, one day when I was going to the my school, I suddenly recalled that I forgot to bring my ID card which would makes me impossible to enter my school as a student.

✓ Yes, one day when I was going to my school, I suddenly recalled that I forgot to bring my ID card which would make it impossible for me to enter my school as a student.

“would”是情态动词，后面应接动词原形“make”，而不是“makes”。

× 1st I have to remember to do my homework because I sometimes would get addicted to electronic devices and also I think that I need to remember to brush my teeth before sleep because it is very good for my teeth.

✓ First, I have to remember to do my homework because I sometimes get addicted to electronic devices and also I think that I need to remember to brush my teeth before sleep because it is very good for my teeth.

“would get addicted”在这里表达习惯动作时不合适，应使用一般现在时“get addicted”。

× I usually recall important things in my mind about 20 minutes before.

✓ I usually recall important things in my mind about 20 minutes in advance.

“about 20 minutes before”表达不完整，应该用“in advance”表示提前。

× By doing this, I would be impossible to forget these important things when I have to use it.

✓ By doing this, it would be impossible for me to forget these important things when I have to use them.

“would be impossible to forget”缺少主语，应为“it would be impossible for me to forget”。“use it”中“it”指代不明确，改为复数“them”指代“important things”。