Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和主谓一致问题，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和结构，避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often lose my keys and phone. Also, if someone tells me a secret, I usually forget it quickly, so I don't get surprised later.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和连贯的句子结构，明确表达忘记带身份证的具体情境。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I went out without my ID card, which caused problems when I tried to take the train and the airplane.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达需要记住的事项，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink more water. Also, because I have some sleeping problems, I have to take my medicine on time.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达使用手机和应用程序提醒的重要性及其效果。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down on my phone. Some apps remind me at the right time, which helps a lot. However, sometimes I still forget to do things even after the reminders.

× I'm a forgetful person, I always lose my items such as keys and phones and if someone tell me some secrets I will never surprise them because I will just forget about it.

✓ I'm a forgetful person. I always lose my items such as keys and phones, and if someone tells me some secrets, I will never surprise them because I will just forget about it.

主谓不一致错误。主语是第三人称单数someone，谓语动词tell应改为tells。建议注意主语和谓语的一致性。

× Yes, I sometimes I forgotten some important things, like when I go outside, I didn't bring my ID card, so I came to take the train and the airplane.

✓ Yes, sometimes I forget some important things, like when I go outside, I don't bring my ID card, so I have to take the train and the airplane.

时态错误。forgotten是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时forget以符合上下文。didn't bring和came to take表达不清，改为don't bring和have to take更合适。

× Yes, I sometimes I forgotten some important things, like when I go outside, I didn't bring my ID card, so I came to take the train and the airplane.

✓ Yes, sometimes I forget some important things, like when I go outside, I don't bring my ID card, so I have to take the train and the airplane.

介词使用不当。原句中came to take表达不自然，改为have to take更符合表达需要。

× I need to remember to drink, drink water more and I have some problem with my sleeping so I need to take the medicine as a on time.

✓ I need to remember to drink more water, and I have some problems with my sleeping, so I need to take the medicine on time.

量词使用错误。drink water more应改为drink more water，some problem应为some problems，a on time中的a多余，应去掉。

× I need to remember to drink, drink water more and I have some problem with my sleeping so I need to take the medicine as a on time.

✓ I need to remember to drink more water, and I have some problems with my sleeping, so I need to take the medicine on time.

介词使用错误。as a on time不正确，正确表达是on time，表示准时。

× I usually keep them write them down on my phone. Some apps will remind me at the proper time but it actually help a lot. Help a little because it after they remind me I will quickly forget to do this thing.

✓ I usually keep them by writing them down on my phone. Some apps will remind me at the proper time, but they actually help a little because after they remind me, I quickly forget to do the thing.

句子结构错误。keep them write them down应改为keep them by writing them down，help a lot与help a little矛盾，改为help a little更符合语境。句子连接不顺畅，需调整。

× I usually keep them write them down on my phone.

✓ I usually keep them by writing them down on my phone.

动词+ing形式错误。keep后面应接动名词形式writing，表示保持某种状态或行为。

× Some apps will remind me at the proper time but it actually help a lot.

✓ Some apps will remind me at the proper time, but they actually help a lot.

主谓不一致。apps是复数，后面代词应为they，动词help也应为复数形式help。