Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when someone tells me something important, I can usually remember their exact words. However, sometimes I find it difficult to recall everything perfectly.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid vague phrases and use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I usually don't forget important things, but when I am tired or very busy, I sometimes forget small, unimportant details. However, I try to stay organized to avoid this.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be more fluent by reducing hesitation and using linking words. Also, try to combine related ideas into one sentence for better coherence.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my prayer times because I am a Muslim. Additionally, I have to keep track of my family's needs and my work schedule since I am a physiotherapist.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more structured by using linking words and explaining your methods step by step. Avoid unclear phrases and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: I usually try to recall the events in my mind and remember who told me the information. If I take notes at the time, I review them later to help me remember important things.

× OK, in the honesty, sometimes I feel that I'm memorizing everything and I remember everything around me.

✓ OK, in honesty, sometimes I feel that I'm memorizing everything and I remember everything around me.

The phrase 'in the honesty' is incorrect because 'honesty' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'the' in this context. The correct phrase is 'in honesty'.

× If if somebody tells me something, I can tell the same things as same words she, she or he told me.

✓ If somebody tells me something, I can tell the same things with the same words she or he told me.

The repetition of 'If' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'as same words' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'with the same words'. The pronouns 'she, she or he' are redundant; it should be 'she or he'.

× But sometimes I feel that.

✓ But sometimes I feel that.

This sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly, which is a sentence structure error. However, since it does not meet the specified grammar problem types, no correction is applied here.

× Usually not, but when I was tired or I busy sometimes I forget, but not what.

✓ Usually not, but when I was tired or busy, sometimes I forgot, but not important things.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time reference 'when I was tired'. Also, 'I busy' is incorrect; it should be 'I was busy' or simply 'busy'. The phrase 'but not what' is unclear and corrected to 'but not important things' for clarity.

× Actually, I need to remember my prayers time because of, because I am, uh, a Muslim girl, uh, and my family's needs, uh, and my work schedule because I am a doctor, a physiotherapist.

✓ Actually, I need to remember my prayer times because I am a Muslim girl, and my family's needs, and my work schedule because I am a doctor, a physiotherapist.

The phrase 'prayers time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prayer times'. The phrase 'because of, because I am' is redundant; 'because I am' suffices. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' are removed for clarity.

× OK, I usually do flashback in my mind for the events and with the members who told me that when I'm aware that happened and if I take notes in that time, I return to that notes and read them.

✓ OK, I usually flash back in my mind to the events and the people who told me about them when I am aware that they happened, and if I take notes at that time, I return to those notes and read them.

The phrase 'do flashback in my mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'flash back in my mind'. The preposition 'for' should be 'to' when referring to events. 'Members' is better replaced with 'people' in this context. 'That when I'm aware that happened' is unclear and corrected to 'when I am aware that they happened'. 'In that time' should be 'at that time'. 'That notes' should be 'those notes'.