Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because since childhood, I have been able to learn texts by heart quickly. For example, when teachers ask me to memorise a passage, I can do it efficiently.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地描述事件，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, during my final exam, I forgot to apply the DCF valuation method for a question, and I regretted it afterwards.

Sugerencia: 回答较为清晰，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词。

Ejemplo: I always keep track of my timetable. For instance, every morning I check it to avoid missing any classes. Also, on weekends, I need to remember my appointments with friends.

Sugerencia: 回答中有过多的语气词，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更简洁自然的表达，并增加连接词使句子连贯。

Ejemplo: I have developed the habit of writing a to-do list. Every morning, I check it to make sure I don't miss any important tasks. I believe this habit helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because since I since I was a child, I can learn something by heart quickly.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because since I was a child, I have been able to learn something by heart quickly.

这里涉及到现在完成时的使用，因为动作从过去持续到现在，应该用现在完成时表达持续的状态，而不是简单现在时。

× Yes, in my exam, in my final exam, the question asked me to use the DCF valuation but I actually forgot that and and at that time I was I repented of it.

✓ Yes, in my final exam, the question asked me to use the DCF valuation but I actually forgot that and at that time I regretted it.

这里“repented”用法不当，应该用“regretted”表示后悔。同时，句子中时态应保持过去时一致。

× During this I always keep track of my timetable.

✓ During this time, I always keep track of my timetable.

“During”后面应接时间名词，单独使用“this”不合适，应改为“this time”。

× For example, at in the morning I must check my timetable to avoid forgetting any classes.

✓ For example, in the morning I must check my timetable to avoid forgetting any classes.

“at in the morning”中“at”多余，正确用法是“in the morning”。

× During weekends I must remember my appointments with my friends.

✓ During the weekends, I must remember my appointments with my friends.

“During weekends”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“During the weekends”。

× I have developed a habit of uh, uh, writing A to do list and every morning I will check my To Do List to ensure I, uh, don't uh, miss any items.

✓ I have developed a habit of writing a to-do list and every morning I check my to-do list to ensure I don't miss any items.

“A to do list”中“to do list”应连字符连接且小写，且“will”在此处不必要，使用一般现在时更合适。