Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially when I can see them visually. However, I find it difficult to remember numbers or street names. For example, I remember faces easily because I pay attention to eye contact.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear example and use linking words to organize your thoughts. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, once at work, I forgot to submit a tender on time, which caused some problems. This experience taught me to be more careful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state what you need to remember and how you do it. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my appointments and tasks. Therefore, I make schedules and write notes, which help me stay organized and not forget important things.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more structured and fluent. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your examples for better understanding.

Ejemplo: I usually remember important things by making notes on my mobile phone. For example, when I have a laser appointment or a haircut, I write it down to stay organized and not forget.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things but I have I memorizing skills.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things but I have poor memorizing skills.

The phrase 'I have I memorizing skills' is incorrect because 'memorizing' is a verb in the -ing form used incorrectly here as a noun without a proper modifier. The correct form is 'memorizing skills' with an adjective like 'poor' to describe the skills. Also, the repeated 'I' is a mistake. The sentence needs to be corrected to 'I have poor memorizing skills' to make grammatical sense.

× I can't remember streets or numbers but I can remember everything by eye contact and I memorizing way.

✓ I can't remember streets or numbers but I can remember everything by eye contact and my memorizing way.

The phrase 'I memorizing way' is incorrect because 'memorizing' is a verb in the -ing form and cannot directly modify 'way' without a possessive pronoun. The correct form is 'my memorizing way' to indicate possession. Alternatively, 'my way of memorizing' would also be correct.

× Maybe it was a tender day at work.

✓ Maybe it was a tough day at work.

The word 'tender' is incorrectly used here to describe a difficult day. 'Tender' means gentle or soft, which does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely 'tough' or 'hard'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but correcting it improves clarity.

× I used to apply for tenders and as I remember correctly, I have forgotten.

✓ I used to apply for tenders and, as I remember correctly, I forgot.

The phrase 'I have forgotten' is present perfect tense, which is less appropriate here because the action is completed in the past and linked to a specific time. The simple past 'I forgot' fits better. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× You know, it's helped me to remember and to make schedule the things I have to do during the day and the notes is the best way for me to Remember Me the things I should do.

✓ You know, it helps me to remember and to make a schedule of the things I have to do during the day, and notes are the best way for me to remember the things I should do.

Several preposition and article errors here: 'make schedule' should be 'make a schedule'; 'schedule the things' should be 'schedule of the things'; 'the notes is' should be 'notes are' (subject-verb agreement); 'Remember Me' is incorrect capitalization and unnecessary pronoun. Correct prepositions and articles improve clarity and grammar.

× I usually make notes umm when I have to go on my laser appointment.

✓ I usually make notes when I have to go to my laser appointment.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'appointment'. The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to an appointment.

× So in selling haircuts and silent procedures I always make notes in my mobile phone and it I find it very helpful to organize.

✓ So, in selling haircuts and silent procedures, I always make notes on my mobile phone, and I find it very helpful to stay organized.

The sentence has conjunction and article errors: missing commas for clarity; 'in my mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone' because notes are made on a device; 'and it I find it' is incorrect and should be 'and I find it'; 'to organize' is vague, 'to stay organized' is clearer.