Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“I don't really good at memorizing things”应为“I am not really good at memorizing things”。建议你使用简单且正确的句子结构，避免重复和语法错误。同时，回答时要直接回应问题，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I am not very good at memorizing things. For example, last year I took a psychology course that required me to remember many vocabulary words and terms, which was quite challenging and time-consuming for me.

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了经历，但句子结构有些重复和不够连贯。建议使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”来使句子更流畅，并注意避免重复词汇。

Ejemplo: Definitely, I remember last summer when I was taking summer classes. On the first day, I completely forgot my class schedule, so I missed the class, which I really regretted.

Sugerencia: 你的回答有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议你简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的语法，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, as a student, I need to remember everything my teachers teach in class. By remembering these things, I can get good grades on tests and answer questions correctly.

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了方法，但有语法错误和句子不完整。建议你使用完整句子，避免重复，并且清楚地说明你的记忆方法。

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. For school, I usually take notes on paper to help me remember what the teachers say. In daily life, I like to make notes on my phone to remember important things.

× I don't really good at memorizing things since I don't have bad, I don't have a good memorization.

✓ I am not really good at memorizing things since I don't have a good memory.

The phrase 'I don't really good' is incorrect because 'good' is an adjective and needs a linking verb like 'am' to connect it to the subject. Also, 'I don't have bad' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'I don't have a good memory' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× For example, I took a psychology last year which there are a lot of memorization like I need to memorize a lot of vocabularies and terms, which is which is which cost me a lot of times and I wasn't good at it at all.

✓ For example, I took a psychology course last year which required a lot of memorization, like I needed to memorize a lot of vocabulary and terms, which cost me a lot of time and I wasn't good at it at all.

The word 'psychology' needs an article and a noun to specify the subject, so 'a psychology course' is correct. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect because 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'a lot of times' should be 'a lot of time' because 'time' here is uncountable.

× The first day of school I totally forgot the class schedule I got.

✓ On the first day of school, I totally forgot the class schedule I had.

The sentence needs the past tense verb 'had' to indicate possession of the schedule in the past. Also, adding 'On' at the beginning improves sentence structure.

× So absolutely I I didn't make it that day, which I regret.

✓ So absolutely, I didn't make it that day, which I regret.

There is a repeated pronoun 'I I' which is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× So in my daily life and I'm currently still a student, I have to remember all the things people to my teachers taught in the class and like remember by remembering them I can get a good grades on the test and you see to get the answer right.

✓ So in my daily life, and since I'm currently still a student, I have to remember all the things my teachers taught in class, and by remembering them, I can get good grades on tests and get the answers right.

The phrase 'people to my teachers taught' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'my teachers taught'. Also, 'a good grades' is incorrect because 'grades' is plural and should not have 'a'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well it also depend on the situation.

✓ Well, it also depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' needs to agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'depends'.

× So I usually take note on paper to help to help me memorize all the things teachers speak in the class.

✓ So I usually take notes on paper to help me memorize all the things teachers say in class.

The phrase 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to writing down information. Also, 'teachers speak in the class' is better expressed as 'teachers say in class'. The repeated phrase 'to help' is redundant and removed.