Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, clarify your strengths and weaknesses in memorizing with better sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing, especially in subjects like maths and physics. For example, my teachers and friends often praise my strong language skills. However, I sometimes struggle when I have to remember a large amount of information.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by organizing it logically with linking words and correcting grammar. Be more concise and avoid repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, last year I forgot my admit card at home when I traveled 150 kilometers to an examination hall in Delhi, which caused a lot of trouble for me.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you need to remember daily.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember several things, such as my meal plans for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Additionally, I have to keep track of the time I go for exercise or a morning walk, and I also need to focus on my studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by removing redundancy and improving sentence flow. Use linking words properly and avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'so'.

Ejemplo: I am quite good at remembering important things. For example, I usually write lists and set reminders on my phone. Moreover, when I have a long trip or many urgent tasks, I make sure to write everything down to stay organized.

× Yes, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things especially when it comes to sub some subjects like maths and physics and I often raise by my friends and teachers for my strong language skills.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things especially when it comes to some subjects like maths and physics and I am often praised by my friends and teachers for my strong language skills.

The phrase 'raise by my friends' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'praised' which is the past participle form used in passive voice. Also, 'sub some subjects' seems to be a typo and should be 'some subjects'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× But when it comes to a lot of stuff to remember I have failed at that time.

✓ But when it comes to a lot of stuff to remember, I have failed at times.

The phrase 'I have failed at that time' is incorrect because 'have failed' is present perfect tense which does not pair well with 'at that time' indicating a specific past moment. Changing to 'have failed at times' correctly expresses occasional failure without specifying a single past time.

× Yes, I have forgotten my admit card many times and it's a matter of last year when I went to a examination hall in Delhi and it was about 150 kilometers away from my house and I forgot my admit card at my home and that created a lot of trouble for me at.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten my admit card many times and it was a matter of last year when I went to an examination hall in Delhi which was about 150 kilometers away from my house and I forgot my admit card at home and that created a lot of trouble for me.

The article 'a' before 'examination hall' is incorrect because 'examination' starts with a vowel sound, so 'an' should be used. Also, 'at my home' is better expressed as 'at home'. The sentence ending with 'at' is incomplete and should be removed for clarity.

× There are a lot of things that I need to remember in my life such as what do I plan to eat for my dinner, breakfast and lunch as well the time that I go for exercise or morning walk and sometimes I have I should take care of my studies.

✓ There are a lot of things that I need to remember in my life such as what I plan to eat for dinner, breakfast, and lunch, as well as the time I go for exercise or a morning walk, and sometimes I need to take care of my studies.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect question form 'what do I plan' inside a statement. It also lacks conjunctions and articles in places. Correcting the sentence structure and removing unnecessary words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, if I tell you the truth, I'm very good at remembering important things, so I usually write a list when people set reminders on my phone.

✓ Well, if I tell you the truth, I'm very good at remembering important things, so I usually write a list and set reminders on my phone.

The phrase 'when people set reminders on my phone' is incorrect because 'people' do not set reminders on the student's phone. The conjunction 'and' better connects the two related actions performed by the student.

× Additionally, when I have to go for a long trip or I have many urgent tasks, so I make sure to write everything down so that I can organize everything efficiently.

✓ Additionally, when I have to go for a long trip or have many urgent tasks, I make sure to write everything down so that I can organize everything efficiently.

The conjunction 'so' after 'tasks' is unnecessary and creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'so' corrects the sentence structure and improves flow.