Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
I'm not good at memorizing things. I always forgot to do something or to eat something or to drink something.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I did. Uh, last time I forgot to do my homework so. Uh-huh. Uh huh. Hee hee. Whoa.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I need to remember like buying groceries to pay rent and to pay the electricity fees, water fees and my credit card fees.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I remember important things by using calendar to help me to remember. I will mark them down in my calendar like a paying rent on 8th of July and paying credit card payment.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“forgot”应为“forget”,并且回答应更自然流畅,避免重复和语气词。可以简洁明了地表达观点,并适当举例说明。
Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget to take my medicine or complete small tasks on time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答缺乏具体细节且有过多无意义的语气词,影响表达的连贯性和自然性。应直接回答问题,并补充具体细节说明。
Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot to do my homework because I was very busy with other assignments, which made me realize the importance of managing my time better.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较为完整,但表达不够流畅,缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯,并丰富细节。
Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to buy groceries, pay the rent, and settle bills like electricity, water, and credit card payments.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答基本清晰,但有语法错误和重复表达。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并适当扩展细节,使回答更自然。
Ejemplo: I use a calendar app on my phone to keep track of important dates. For instance, I mark the rent payment due on the 8th of July and credit card payment deadlines to avoid forgetting them.
× I always forgot to do something or to eat something or to drink something.
✓ I always forget to do something or to eat something or to drink something.
句子中使用了"always"表示习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时,而不是过去时。"forgot"是过去时,应该改为"forget"。
× I need to remember like buying groceries to pay rent and to pay the electricity fees, water fees and my credit card fees.
✓ I need to remember things like buying groceries, paying rent, and paying the electricity fees, water fees, and my credit card fees.
动词后面接动名词时,应该保持形式一致。原句中"to pay rent"和"buying groceries"形式不一致,应该统一为动名词形式。
× I remember important things by using calendar to help me to remember.
✓ I remember important things by using a calendar to help me remember.
"calendar"前缺少冠词,应该加不定冠词"a"。此外,"help me to remember"中"to"可以省略,更自然。
× I will mark them down in my calendar like a paying rent on 8th of July and paying credit card payment.
✓ I will mark them down in my calendar, like paying rent on the 8th of July and paying the credit card payment.
"a paying rent"中"a"使用错误,应该去掉。日期前应加定冠词"the"。此外,"credit card payment"前应加定冠词"the"。