Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of 'I think I'm quite good at memorizing things because when I was younger I used to go to a mental arithmetic lessons and it helped me a lot at memorizing calculating things and nowadays I do it on,' you could say, 'I am quite good at memorizing because I attended mental arithmetic lessons when I was younger, which helped me improve my memory, especially for calculations.'

Ejemplo: I am quite good at memorizing because I attended mental arithmetic lessons when I was younger, which helped me improve my memory, especially for calculations.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and hesitations which affect fluency. Try to speak more smoothly and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, you could say, 'Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once, I forgot to tell my parents that I was going camping with my friends, so they were very worried when I left.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once, I forgot to tell my parents that I was going camping with my friends, so they were very worried when I left.

Sugerencia: Your answer is meaningful but could be more directly related to the question about what you personally need to remember daily. Also, improve grammar and use linking words. For example, 'In my daily life, I need to remember to be mindful of others' emotions because maintaining good relationships with loved ones is very important.'

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to be mindful of others' emotions because maintaining good relationships with loved ones is very important.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid repetition and use linking words. For example, 'I usually try to remember important things mentally, but if I think I might forget, I write notes and review them later to remind myself.'

Ejemplo: I usually try to remember important things mentally, but if I think I might forget, I write notes and review them later to remind myself.

× I used to go to a mental arithmetic lessons and it helped me a lot at memorizing calculating things

✓ I used to go to mental arithmetic lessons and it helped me a lot with memorizing calculating things

The phrase 'a mental arithmetic lessons' incorrectly mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'lessons'. The article should be removed to correctly match the plural noun. Also, 'at memorizing calculating things' is awkward; 'with memorizing calculating things' is more natural.

× it helped me a lot at memorizing calculating things

✓ it helped me a lot with memorizing and calculating things

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before the gerund phrase. The correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'memorizing calculating things' lacks conjunction; adding 'and' clarifies the meaning.

× and nowadays I do it on.

✓ and nowadays I still do it.

The phrase 'do it on' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct expression is 'still do it' to indicate continuation in the present.

× there's a thing that everyone experienced.

✓ there's a thing that everyone has experienced.

The verb 'experienced' should be in the present perfect tense 'has experienced' to indicate an action that happened at an unspecified time in the past relevant to the present.

× I forgot, umm, to tell my parents that I'm going to camp with my friends.

✓ I forgot, umm, to tell my parents that I was going to camp with my friends.

The reported speech should be in past tense to match the past tense 'forgot'. 'I'm going' should be changed to 'I was going'.

× I think we should be mindful of other people emotions and really take care of people who we close with.

✓ I think we should be mindful of other people's emotions and really take care of people who are close to us.

The phrase 'other people emotions' lacks possessive form; it should be 'other people's emotions'. Also, 'people who we close with' is incorrect; it should be 'people who are close to us'.

× people who we close with

✓ people who are close to us

The pronoun usage is incorrect; 'we close with' should be replaced with 'are close to us' to correctly express the relationship.

× I usually try to keep it in my mind, but sometimes when I know that I'll definitely forget about it, I just take notes.

✓ I usually try to keep it in my mind, but sometimes when I know that I'll definitely forget it, I just take notes.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'forget'. The correct phrase is 'forget it'.

× And then I came back to them and read them and I'd be like, oh OK, I have to do this.

✓ And then I come back to them and read them and I'm like, oh OK, I have to do this.

The sentence mixes past tense 'came back' with present tense 'I'd be like'. To maintain consistency, present tense is preferred here as it describes habitual action.