Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear and specific details. Avoid confusing phrases and ensure coherence by using linking words.

Ejemplo: I am not very good at memorising things nowadays because I have a very busy lifestyle. For example, I often forget where I parked my car. However, when I was younger, I could remember things more easily.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples to make your answer clearer and more natural.

Ejemplo: I rarely forget important tasks because they make me nervous. Therefore, I memorise them carefully and complete them step by step, which helps to reduce my stress.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas logically, use linking words, and provide specific details to explain what you need to remember in your daily life.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things at work because I am a nurse. For instance, I have to recall each patient's treatment plan, including the types of drugs and medical devices they require.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to structure your answer clearly, use linking words, and provide specific details about your method of remembering important things.

Ejemplo: I prefer to write important tasks and duties on my phone because my life is very busy. This method helps me to focus and complete tasks step by step without forgetting anything.

× I recall that when I was younger I had a memory like an elephant or recall lick recalled that all of things on that time.

✓ I recall that when I was younger I had a memory like an elephant and recalled all of the things at that time.

The phrase 'recall lick recalled' is incorrect and seems to be a typographical error. The correct past participle 'recalled' should be used once to indicate the action completed in the past. Also, 'all of things' should be 'all of the things' to be grammatically correct.

× I cannot memorize all lots of things simultaneously and I lose my car.

✓ I cannot memorize lots of things simultaneously and I lose my car.

The phrase 'all lots of things' is redundant and incorrect. 'Lots of things' is sufficient to express a large quantity. Also, 'lose my car' is unclear; it might be a mistake or idiomatic expression, but grammatically the correction focuses on quantifier usage.

× If I have an important task to do, I never forgot it because it makes me nervous and I get lots of stress to do that.

✓ If I have an important task to do, I never forget it because it makes me nervous and I get a lot of stress doing that.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence is conditional and refers to habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, 'lots of stress to do that' is awkward; 'a lot of stress doing that' is more natural.

× So I memorize all of important subjects and I recall them to do step by step and it relief my stress.

✓ So I memorize all the important subjects and recall them to do step by step and it relieves my stress.

'All of important subjects' is incorrect; it should be 'all the important subjects' to correctly use the definite article with 'all'. Also, 'relief' is a noun; the verb form 'relieves' is needed here.

× When I go to my workplace I have lots of career plans since I work as a nurse and during that time we have lots of patient in our workplace.

✓ When I go to my workplace I have lots of career plans since I work as a nurse and during that time we have lots of patients in our workplace.

'Lots of patient' is incorrect because 'patient' is singular; the plural 'patients' is required after 'lots of'.

× So I have to cure them and treat them and they have different type of drugs and different kinds of devices I should.

✓ So I have to cure and treat them, and they have different types of drugs and different kinds of devices that I should use.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'. Also, the phrase 'devices I should' is incomplete; adding 'that I should use' completes the thought.

× Night is I prefer to write an important subjects and duties on my cell phones and especially when I have an important things because since I have a hectic life so I cannot remember recall that all of things simultaneously.

✓ At night, I prefer to write important subjects and duties on my cell phone, especially when I have important things because, since I have a hectic life, I cannot recall all things simultaneously.

The phrase 'Night is' is incorrect; 'At night' is the correct adverbial phrase. 'An important subjects' is incorrect because 'subjects' is plural and should not have 'an'. 'Cell phones' should be singular 'cell phone' if referring to one device. The phrase 'remember recall that all of things' is redundant and incorrect; 'recall all things' is sufficient. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× It helps me to focus better and do them a step by step and it provides.

✓ It helps me to focus better and do them step by step, and it helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'do them a step by step' is incorrect; 'step by step' should not have an article. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and it provides'; completing the thought improves clarity.