Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct tense and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am generally good at memorising things because I developed this habit during my school days. For example, I used to memorise multiplication tables to improve my math skills, which helped me score well in exams.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and lacks fluency. Try to use past tense correctly and avoid fragmented sentences. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, during my last passport appointment, I forgot to bring a crucial document, which made me feel very disappointed with myself.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and somewhat repetitive. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' properly and finish your points clearly.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. Firstly, as a working professional, I have to keep track of my meetings and appointments. Secondly, I also need to remember personal tasks like grocery shopping and paying bills.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use present tense consistently and avoid fragmented sentences. Use linking words like 'so' or 'which' to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I use an application called To Do List to remember important things. I check off items as I complete them, which helps me stay organised and manage my time efficiently.

× I grab this habit when I was in school 'cause most of the times I used to cram up.

✓ I grabbed this habit when I was in school because most of the time I used to cram.

The verb 'grab' should be in the past tense 'grabbed' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was in school'. Also, 'most of the times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'most of the time'. 'Cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for clarity.

× They studies and I was able to get good score.

✓ They studied and I was able to get a good score.

The verb 'studies' is incorrect here; it should be the past tense 'studied' to agree with the past context. Also, 'good score' needs an article 'a' before it.

× For instance, I used to just to memorize the table.

✓ For instance, I used to just memorize the table.

The phrase 'used to just to memorize' has an extra 'to'. The correct form is 'used to just memorize' because 'used to' is followed by the base verb without 'to'.

× The last time I forgot something was when I was going for my passport appointment and I forgot an important document that needs to be submitted and I was.

✓ The last time I forgot something was when I was going for my passport appointment and I forgot an important document that needed to be submitted, and I was.

The verb 'needs' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past context. The sentence is incomplete but the correction focuses on the tense issue.

× Just disappointed on myself that how could I forgot an important document.

✓ I was just disappointed in myself about how I could forget an important document.

The verb 'forgot' should be 'forget' after 'could' because modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'disappointed on myself' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in myself'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Just disappointed on myself that how could I forgot an important document.

✓ I was just disappointed in myself about how I could forget an important document.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'disappointed'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I need to look after my schedule for the rest of the day and I need to memorize the upcoming schedule or meetings that I have to undertake.

✓ I need to look after my schedule for the rest of the day and memorize the upcoming schedule or meetings that I have to attend.

The verb 'undertake' is not appropriate here; 'attend' is the correct verb for meetings. Also, 'need to' is followed by the base verb without 'to' in the second clause for parallelism.

× And secondly, I need to memorize my.

✓ And secondly, I need to memorize my tasks or responsibilities.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'my'. Adding 'tasks or responsibilities' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Well, I used an application called To Do List.

✓ Well, I use an application called To Do List.

The verb 'used' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'use' is appropriate.

× What I do is I just. Check off the items as I have completed and it helps me stay organized and helped me manage my time efficiently.

✓ What I do is I just check off the items as I complete them, and it helps me stay organized and manage my time efficiently.

The verb 'check' should be in base form after 'do is'. 'Have completed' is changed to 'complete' for present habitual action. 'Helped' is changed to 'help' to maintain present tense consistency.

× This is an important way that I can keep my schedule maintain an.

✓ This is an important way that I can keep my schedule maintained.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Keep my schedule maintained' is a correct phrase meaning to maintain the schedule properly.