Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more structured by directly answering the question first, then giving a clear example. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am generally good at memorising things. However, when I am very busy or stressed with important work, I sometimes find it difficult to recall information if interrupted. For example, I used to remember things very clearly when I was a child, such as my childhood memories.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear example. Use complete sentences and avoid unclear pronouns or phrases. Try to organise your answer logically with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, during my NEET examination, I forgot to bring my hall ticket because I thought I had packed it with my other items. I had to rush back home to get it, which made me very anxious.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to directly answer the question with specific details. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid incomplete thoughts and provide a full explanation.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially because I work at a mobile veterinary clinic. For example, I have to remember to mark my attendance regularly, but sometimes I forget to do so even though I arrive on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise.

Ejemplo: To remember important things like family birthdays, I write them down in my calendar app on my phone. This helps me prepare gifts and plan celebrations because the app also sends me reminders, which I find very useful.

× Yes I'm good at memorizing things but when I'm whenever I'm in a heavy work or important work if someone comes in ask me about anything I don't remember anything.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things but whenever I'm doing heavy or important work, if someone comes in and asks me about anything, I don't remember anything.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'in a heavy work' which is ungrammatical; 'doing heavy or important work' is correct. Also, 'if someone comes in ask me' lacks the conjunction 'and' and the verb agreement is wrong; it should be 'and asks me'. The present participle 'doing' is needed to express ongoing action.

× But when I was a kid I used to remember things clearly even till now I remember my childhood days and how we spent a very.

✓ But when I was a kid, I used to remember things clearly. Even now, I remember my childhood days and how we spent them.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Spent a very' is incomplete; it should be 'spent them' or 'spent time'. Also, adding punctuation and splitting into two sentences improves clarity. The past tense 'used to remember' is correct for past habits.

× S. Whenever I'm attending my NEET examination during the day, I totally forgot it my hall ticket because I thought that I kept it about my luggage or the items.

✓ Whenever I was attending my NEET examination during the day, I totally forgot my hall ticket because I thought I had kept it with my luggage or other items.

The sentence has several errors: 'S.' is unclear and should be removed. 'I'm attending' should be past tense 'I was attending' to match 'forgot'. 'Forgot it my hall ticket' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot my hall ticket'. 'Kept it about my luggage' is incorrect preposition use; 'with my luggage' is correct.

× I took her to the center but it was not at the time immediately before the rush it to my home and BR.

✓ I took it to the center but it was not there at the time, so I immediately rushed back home.

The sentence is confusing and contains errors: 'I took her' should be 'I took it' referring to the hall ticket. 'It was not at the time' is incomplete; 'not there at the time' is correct. 'Immediately before the rush it to my home and BR' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'immediately rushed back home' for clarity.

× In my daily life I had to remember a many things because at first right now I'm doing a job in mobile vet nary clinic Ann First I forgot is about my attendance.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember many things because right now I'm doing a job in a mobile veterinary clinic. At first, I forgot about my attendance.

'A many things' is incorrect; 'many things' is correct without 'a'. 'Had to' should be 'have to' to match present tense. 'Vet nary' is misspelled as 'veterinary'. 'Ann First I forgot is about my attendance' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'At first, I forgot about my attendance'.

× I'll come in regular time and I just go to my work but I forgot to.

✓ I come at regular time and just go to my work, but I forget sometimes.

'I'll come in regular time' is future tense but context requires present tense 'I come at regular time'. 'I forgot to' is incomplete; needs object or completion. Changed to 'I forget sometimes' for clarity and correctness.

× And things when it comes to important days like birthdays in my family, I shall write them now in my calendar adding it once.

✓ When it comes to important days like birthdays in my family, I write them in my calendar, adding them once.

Starting sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary. 'I shall write them now' is awkward; 'I write them' is better. 'Adding it once' should be 'adding them once' to agree with plural 'days'.

× And this helps me to remember to prepare gifts or any any celebrations on I find it.

✓ This helps me remember to prepare gifts or any celebrations I find.

'Any any' is repeated and incorrect. 'On I find it' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I find'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Using calendar app on my phone is very effective because it also sends me reminders.

✓ Using the calendar app on my phone is very effective because it also sends me reminders.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'calendar app' is an article error (ID 22), but also relates to preposition use. 'On my phone' is correct preposition use. Added 'the' for correctness.