Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest and relevant but can be more concise and structured. Avoid filler words like 'Uhm' and try to combine similar ideas to make your response more natural and effective. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially names and dates. For example, I often forget birthdays, which can be quite embarrassing.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question well but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'I' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be careful with prepositions and article usage.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once booked a flight for a specific date but showed up at the airport a few days later because I had forgotten the booking date. This mistake cost me a lot of money.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains relevant details but is somewhat long and lacks clear structure. Try to organise your ideas into clear sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points.

Ejemplo: I need to remember passwords for my phone and laptop because most of my devices are protected. Also, since I have a large family, I try to remember their birthdays, but I often forget, so they remind me regularly.

Sugerencia: Your answer explains your methods but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and sentence structures, and connect your ideas with linking words for better flow.

Ejemplo: I try to note important things down on paper or use an app on my phone as soon as they are mentioned to me. Additionally, I set reminders to avoid forgetting important tasks.

× I'm not the best at learning stuff or remembering them.

✓ I'm not the best at learning stuff or remembering it.

The pronoun 'them' is used incorrectly here because 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should be referred to with 'it'. Using 'them' implies a plural countable noun, which is incorrect in this context.

× I I booked my flight for a certain date and I showed up at the airport of few days later because I'd forgotten the date that I booked my flight.

✓ I booked my flight for a certain date and I showed up at the airport a few days later because I'd forgotten the date that I booked my flight.

The phrase 'of few days later' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a few days later' to indicate a small number of days after the booked date. Also, the repeated 'I' is a redundancy and should be removed.

× I'm known as someone who isn't very good at remembering where there.

✓ I'm known as someone who isn't very good at remembering where they are.

The phrase 'where there' is incorrect. The correct pronoun to refer to people is 'they', and the verb 'are' is needed to complete the clause. 'Where they are' correctly refers to the location of people.