Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially those related to my past experiences. For example, I can easily recall stories from my childhood because I often revisit them in my mind. However, I find it harder to memorise new gestures or unfamiliar information.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I had an important meeting at work, but in my hurry, I forgot to bring the crucial file I had prepared. As a result, the meeting did not go as smoothly as I expected.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Every day, I need to remember the tasks I have to complete. Therefore, I make a to-do list every morning, which helps me keep track of my responsibilities throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your method effectively.

Ejemplo: I usually carry a small pocket diary where I write down important information. This method helps me remember things better because writing reinforces my memory.

× I am very good at memorizing the thing specially when these things are from past.

✓ I am very good at memorizing things, especially when these things are from the past.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' and 'from past' needs the definite article 'the' before 'past'.

× One of my teacher used to tell me that Chad who are the best in the class who memorized the stories from your childhood 3 aren't very good to memorizing the gestural specially those new.

✓ One of my teachers used to tell me that Chad, who is the best in the class, who memorized the stories from his childhood, is not very good at memorizing gestures, especially the new ones.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' after 'one of my'. 'Chad who are' should be 'Chad, who is' because Chad is singular. 'Aren't' should be 'is not' to agree with singular subject. 'To memorizing' should be 'at memorizing'. 'Gestural' is incorrect; it should be 'gestures'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'Those new' should be 'the new ones'.

× Indeed, one day I had I had an important meeting in my office and that day I forget the important file which I put on the desk, but in the. Process of hurry, I forgot my very important for and I dictated a lot later.

✓ Indeed, one day I had an important meeting in my office and that day I forgot the important file which I had put on the desk, but in the process of hurry, I forgot my very important file and I dictated a lot later.

'Forget' should be past tense 'forgot' to match past context. 'Put' should be past perfect 'had put' because it happened before forgetting. 'For' is incorrect and should be 'file'. 'Dictated' seems incorrect in context; possibly 'dictated' is a typo for 'dictated' or 'dictated' is unclear; assuming 'dictated' is intended, it is past tense and correct.

× One of my best edited to make A to do list in the task for me is I write tend To Do List in the morning and the task is I have to remember and I have to memorize all the list which I have to accomplish throughout the day.

✓ One of my best habits is to make a to-do list. I write the to-do list in the morning, and the task is to remember and memorize all the items I have to accomplish throughout the day.

'Edited' is incorrect; likely meant 'habits'. 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'. 'Write tend To Do List' is incorrect; corrected to 'write the to-do list'. 'All the list' should be 'all the items' or 'all the tasks'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Generally I carry a small pocket diary with me where I write my most of the important stuffs.

✓ Generally, I carry a small pocket diary with me where I write most of my important stuff.

'Most of the important stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and does not take plural 's'. 'My most of the important stuffs' should be 'most of my important stuff'. Added comma after 'Generally' for correct adverb placement.