Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things since I was a little kid because I always good at subjects such as English or Mandarin and those subjects need alot ability to marry. Memorize vocabulary or grammar.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yeah, but like sometimes when I was undoing an exam and I would forgotten song. Like hard spelling words or vocabulary Like uhm. Like IK specially I was studying in German major and some recovery.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I always need to remember my scheduling my daily life because I was a person that's really need to scheduling my. Daily tax on and sometimes I I if I didn't take noted note I will forgot it.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I usually just repeated it again in again or listen to songs audios to remember it like 2 stuck in my head and try my best to. Memorize it.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,句子结构混乱,且有拼写错误。建议简化句子结构,注意时态和单词拼写,避免重复表达。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have been good at memorizing things since I was a child because I excelled in subjects like English and Mandarin, which require memorizing vocabulary and grammar.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议用简洁明了的句子直接回答问题,并提供具体例子。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things, such as difficult spelling words during exams, especially when I was studying German.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 表达不流畅,语法错误较多,句子重复。建议使用简单句子,注意时态和单复数,表达清晰。
Ejemplo: I need to remember my daily schedule because I am a person who relies on planning. If I don't take notes, I might forget my tasks.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 表达不连贯,语法错误,词汇使用不当。建议使用连贯的句子,正确使用时态和词汇,清楚描述记忆方法。
Ejemplo: I usually repeat important information several times or listen to audio recordings to help me remember them better.
× I always good at subjects such as English or Mandarin and those subjects need alot ability to marry.
✓ I have always been good at subjects such as English or Mandarin, and those subjects need a lot of ability to memorize.
这里'subjects'是复数,前面缺少动词,且'alot'应为'a lot','ability to marry'应为'ability to memorize'。需要注意复数形式和正确表达能力的短语。
× I always good at subjects such as English or Mandarin and those subjects need alot ability to marry.
✓ I have always been good at subjects such as English or Mandarin, and those subjects need a lot of ability to memorize.
句子中描述过去的状态,应该用现在完成时'have been',而不是简单现在时。
× Yeah, but like sometimes when I was undoing an exam and I would forgotten song.
✓ Yeah, but sometimes when I was taking an exam, I would forget some things.
'undoing'用错,应为'taking','would forgotten'时态错误,应为'would forget'。动词时态需要正确使用。
× Yeah, but like sometimes when I was undoing an exam and I would forgotten song.
✓ Yeah, but sometimes when I was taking an exam, I would forget some things.
'song'应为复数或改为'some things',以符合语境。
× Like hard spelling words or vocabulary Like uhm.
✓ Like hard spelling words or vocabulary, like, umm.
句子中缺少逗号,'Like'重复使用不当,应调整标点和连接词。
× Like IK specially I was studying in German major and some recovery.
✓ Like I know, especially when I was studying German major and some recovery.
'IK'应为'I know',代词使用错误,句子不完整,需补充完整表达。
× I always need to remember my scheduling my daily life because I was a person that's really need to scheduling my.
✓ I always need to remember my schedule in daily life because I am a person who really needs to schedule my tasks.
'scheduling'用作名词时应为'schedule','need to scheduling'应为'need to schedule',介词使用不当。
× I always need to remember my scheduling my daily life because I was a person that's really need to scheduling my.
✓ I always need to remember my schedule in daily life because I am a person who really needs to schedule my tasks.
描述现在的习惯,应使用现在时态,'was'改为'am'。
× sometimes I I if I didn't take noted note I will forgot it.
✓ Sometimes, if I don't take notes, I will forget it.
'didn't take noted note'错误,应为'don't take notes',时态和词形错误。
× sometimes I I if I didn't take noted note I will forgot it.
✓ Sometimes, if I don't take notes, I will forget it.
'noted note'错误,应为'notes',量词使用错误。
× I usually just repeated it again in again or listen to songs audios to remember it like 2 stuck in my head and try my best to.
✓ I usually just repeat it again and again or listen to audio songs to remember it, like to stick in my head and try my best to memorize it.
'repeated'应为'repeat',保持现在时,'in again'应为'again and again','songs audios'顺序错误,应为'audio songs','like 2 stuck'应为'like to stick'。
× I usually just repeated it again in again or listen to songs audios to remember it like 2 stuck in my head and try my best to.
✓ I usually just repeat it again and again or listen to audio songs to remember it, like to stick in my head and try my best to memorize it.
描述习惯动作,应使用一般现在时,'repeated'改为'repeat'。