Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Also, correct sentence structures will make your response more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I place my keys or my mobile phone. Moreover, I struggle to remember faces and names. Therefore, I rely heavily on reminders and alarms to keep track of important tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear due to pronunciation and grammatical mistakes. Focus on forming complete sentences and expressing your feelings clearly. Use linking words to explain the situation and your reaction.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt very sorry about it and apologised sincerely. After that, I promised to remember important dates in the future.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by combining sentences for better flow and using linking words. Also, maintain consistent verb tenses and avoid short, incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medication on time and stay hydrated by drinking enough water. Additionally, I try to exercise regularly because it helps me stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your method clearly. This will make your response more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For example, I set alarms and reminders on my smartphone to keep track of my tasks.

× No, I would not consider myself good at memorizing things because I forgot where I placed keys and my mind my mobile phone.

✓ No, I would not consider myself good at memorizing things because I forget where I place my keys and my mobile phone.

The sentence mixes past tense 'forgot' and 'placed' with the present context of the statement. Since the student is talking about a general difficulty, present tense 'forget' and 'place' should be used to maintain consistency.

× No, I would not consider myself good at memorizing things because I forgot where I placed keys and my mind my mobile phone.

✓ No, I would not consider myself good at memorizing things because I forget where I place my keys and my mobile phone.

The word 'keys' is plural and should be preceded by 'my' to indicate possession clearly. Also, 'my mind my mobile phone' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'my mobile phone'.

× No, I would not consider myself good at memorizing things because I forgot where I placed keys and my mind my mobile phone.

✓ No, I would not consider myself good at memorizing things because I forget where I place my keys and my mobile phone.

The phrase 'and my mind my mobile phone' is incorrect and confusing. It seems the student intended to list two items but used 'and' incorrectly and repeated 'my mind'. Correct conjunction use and clarity are needed.

× I really feedback for it.

✓ I really feel bad about it.

The phrase 'I really feedback for it' is incorrect. 'Feedback' is a noun or verb related to giving comments, not expressing regret. The student likely meant to express regret or apology, so 'I really feel bad about it' is appropriate.

× And I opolo gysd and. Promise to reconized hour day.

✓ And I apologize and promise to remember your birthday.

The sentence contains spelling errors and incomplete structure. 'opolo gysd' seems to be 'apologize', 'Promise to reconized hour day' is unclear but likely means 'promise to remember your birthday'. Correct spelling and sentence completion are necessary.

× In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medication on time and to stay hydrated. By drinking enough water.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medication on time and to stay hydrated by drinking enough water.

The phrase 'By drinking enough water.' is a sentence fragment and incorrectly separated. It should be connected to the previous sentence with a lowercase 'by' to show the method of staying hydrated.

× I also tried to exercise regularly because it helps me to stay healthy.

✓ I also try to exercise regularly because it helps me to stay healthy.

The student is describing a habitual action, so present tense 'try' is appropriate instead of past tense 'tried'.

× I really heavily on technology.

✓ I really rely heavily on technology.

The sentence is missing the verb 'rely' and incorrectly uses 'heavily' without a verb. The correct phrase is 'rely heavily on' to express dependence.

× By my smartphone I've set alarms and reminders to what need to do.

✓ Using my smartphone, I've set alarms and reminders for what I need to do.

The phrase 'By my smartphone' is incorrect; 'Using my smartphone' is correct. Also, 'to what need to do' is ungrammatical; it should be 'for what I need to do' to indicate purpose.