Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it hard to focus on everything at once. So, to manage this, I usually make lists on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organise your answer logically with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'last time' to make your story easier to follow. Also, check your grammar and sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, a few months ago, I forgot my dentist appointment because I was busy with work. This caused some problems with my teeth, so I had to reschedule.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Make sure to answer directly and provide clear supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my study schedule and assignment deadlines because I am a student. Also, I keep track of my personal tasks to stay organised.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your method with specific details. Use linking words like 'so' and 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Since I am not good at memorising, I make lists on my phone to remember important things. This method helps me stay organised and avoid last-minute stress.

× I think I'm not that much good at memorizing things because I can remember is quite low because I have to focus on everything at the time.

✓ I think I'm not that good at memorizing things because my memory is quite low as I have to focus on everything at the time.

The phrase 'that much good' is incorrect; 'that good' is the correct quantifier usage here. Also, 'I can remember is quite low' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'my memory is quite low' to properly express the idea.

× Also to solve this problem I generally make list on my phone.

✓ Also, to solve this problem, I generally make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'make list on my phone' is missing the article 'a' before 'list' and needs commas for clarity. The preposition 'on' is correct here, but the article is necessary.

× A lot of times so if I remember.

✓ Many times, if I remember correctly.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× It was all just a few months ago I forgot my dentist appointment actually had some problem in my teeth so I booked appointment.

✓ It was just a few months ago that I forgot my dentist appointment. I actually had some problems with my teeth, so I booked an appointment.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper connectors and articles. Breaking it into two sentences and adding 'that' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Of dentist but it was a day of my appointment and I just forward that I had to go to the office so it acts.

✓ The dentist appointment was on the day of my appointment, but I forgot that I had to go to the office, so it happened.

The phrase 'Of dentist' is incorrect; it should be 'The dentist appointment.' Also, 'forward' should be 'forgot.' Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity.

× I think there's a lot of things that I need to remember in my daily life, like oh, I need to remember on what work I have to do at the show tool time as I'm a student.

✓ I think there are a lot of things that I need to remember in my daily life, like what work I have to do at school on time as I'm a student.

'There's' should be 'there are' because 'things' is plural. Also, 'on what work' is incorrect; it should be 'what work.' 'Show tool time' seems to be a mishearing of 'school on time.'

× So I have a lot of work to do in my assignment thing.

✓ So I have a lot of work to do for my assignments.

The phrase 'in my assignment thing' is unclear and ungrammatical. 'For my assignments' is the correct prepositional phrase here.

× So whenever come from, you know, also I will start to remember that that the thing that.

✓ So whenever I come back, you know, I start to remember those things.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I' and completing the thought makes it grammatically correct.

× As I told you that I am not that much good and memorizing things all members and things.

✓ As I told you, I am not that good at memorizing things and all matters related to them.

'That much good' is incorrect; 'that good' is correct. 'All members and things' is unclear; 'all matters related to them' is more appropriate.

× So I just to make it sure to make a list on my phone as I have personal use phone as shorting double.

✓ So I just make sure to make a list on my phone as I personally use my phone a lot.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Removing unnecessary words and correcting word order improves clarity.

× So it is very convenient for me to make list on phone and it'll mean to say organize and to avoid last minute stress.

✓ So it is very convenient for me to make lists on my phone, and it helps me stay organized and avoid last-minute stress.

'Make list' should be 'make lists.' 'It'll mean to say organize' is incorrect; 'it helps me stay organized' is correct. Also, 'last minute' should be hyphenated as 'last-minute.'