Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I think my ability to memorise depends on how important the information is. For instance, I tend to forget unimportant details quickly, but when the information is crucial, I make a strong effort to remember it clearly because it helps me a lot.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc xây dựng câu hoàn chỉnh, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as deadlines. For example, recently I missed a deadline for submitting my final term paper, which was very important because it affected my grades.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời trở nên logic hơn.

Ejemplo: In daily life, I need to remember my daily routines, such as skincare and appointments. I usually set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget important tasks.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by adding them to my favorite list or using a reminder app. These apps notify me when deadlines approach, so I don't forget to complete my tasks.

× my mice is not a tend to drift away and I quickly forget it

✓ my mind tends to drift away and I quickly forget it

The word 'mice' is plural, but the intended meaning is singular 'mind'. Also, 'is not a tend' is incorrect; it should be 'tends' to agree with the singular subject 'mind'. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and verb agreement.

× when the information is important and made an effort to remember it clearly because it's helped me

✓ when the information is important and I make an effort to remember it clearly because it helps me

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the context is general, present tense 'make' and 'helps' should be used. Also, the subject 'I' was missing before 'made'.

× Well, yes, I do I. Forget I recently I have chose forgotten or deadlines.

✓ Well, yes, I do forget. Recently, I have chosen to forget deadlines.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced pronouns and incorrect verb forms. 'Do I' is incorrect here; it should be 'do forget'. 'Chose' is past tense; the present perfect 'have chosen' fits better. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× That is real very important because I need to submit it before the deadline is is my final term and it's really like whiteness is really necessary for me.

✓ That is really very important because I need to submit it before the deadline. It is my final term and it is really necessary for me.

The phrase 'real very important' is incorrect; 'really very important' is correct. The sentence is run-on and confusing; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. 'Whiteness' seems to be a misheard or mistyped word and is removed for coherence.

× I think in daily life with should remember our daily routines an an I and I say I think that some important things should be at 2:00 reminder, so to make sure that we did not forget it, but something in daily life we should remember our daily routine like skin care.

✓ I think in daily life we should remember our daily routines. I also think that some important things should have a 2:00 reminder to make sure we do not forget them. For example, in daily life, we should remember routines like skin care.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns ('with' instead of 'we'), repeated words, and unclear phrasing. Correcting pronouns and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I I say I remember important things by adding them to my favorite list or my reminder app tracker. And they all. Remind me when the tax come to the deadlines, whether that light comes so so to make sure I do not forget it.

✓ Well, I remember important things by adding them to my favorite list or my reminder app tracker. They all remind me when the tasks come to the deadlines, whether that light comes, so I make sure I do not forget them.

The sentence has repeated pronouns and unclear phrases ('tax' instead of 'tasks', 'whether that light comes'). Removing repetitions and correcting words improves clarity. Also, 'them' is used to refer to plural 'important things'.