Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些重复且不够连贯。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的连接词，使回答更流畅。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I have a brain injury that affects my memory. Although I try different strategies to improve it, they only help to some extent.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议注意语法准确性，避免句子不完整，同时可以增加细节使回答更具体。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget important things like passwords, which makes me nervous when I need to log into apps or websites.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子，并且注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my assignments on time, usually before 9 PM. I also make lists to prioritize important tasks.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子，注意时态和单复数，同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: To remember important things, I use several strategies. For example, I make notes and set reminders. I also prioritize tasks based on urgency and always write down passwords and important dates.

× Unfortunately, I'm not good at memorizing things because I have the brain injury.

✓ Unfortunately, I'm not good at memorizing things because I have brain injury.

“brain injury”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是一种疾病或状况，而非特指某个脑损伤。

× It damaged my memory function in my brain.

✓ It has damaged my memory function in my brain.

这里描述的是对现在仍有影响的过去事件，使用现在完成时更合适。

× So I have the difficulty of memory and things even I try some strategies to keep my memory working.

✓ So I have difficulty with memory and things even though I try some strategies to keep my memory working.

“difficulty of memory”应改为“difficulty with memory”，且“even”后应加“though”构成连词短语。

× However, it does work to some extent.

✓ However, it does work to some extent.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I have forgotten something important such as passwords.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten some important things such as passwords.

“something”应改为复数“some important things”，因为后面举例了多个密码。

× I have some difficulty adds remembering the passwords all the time.

✓ I have some difficulty remembering the passwords all the time.

“adds”是多余且错误的，应删除。

× So it makes me a little bit nervous when I need to log in some apps or.

✓ So it makes me a little bit nervous when I need to log in to some apps.

“log in”后应加介词“to”，且句尾“or”不完整，应删除。

× In my tenure life I need to remember what should I do in sequence such as I need to finish my assignment assignments before the 9:00 PM such as rose important things I need to make a list to put em in priority or any.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember what I should do in sequence, such as finishing my assignments before 9:00 PM. For important things, I need to make a list and put them in order of priority.

“tenure life”用词错误，应为“daily life”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整；“assignment assignments”重复；“rose”应为“those”；“em”应为“them”；“in priority or any”表达不清，改为“in order of priority”。

× So to remember important things, I have some strategies and skills.

✓ To remember important things, I have some strategies and skills.

“So”在句首多余，去掉更简洁。

× For example, I will make the notes and reminders to.

✓ For example, I will make notes and reminders.

“to”后缺少动词，导致句子不完整，应删除“to”。

× Arrange the important tasks in order of urgency and I always write down there like passwords and other important date.

✓ I arrange important tasks in order of urgency, and I always write down things like passwords and other important dates.

“Arrange”应有主语“I”；“write down there”错误，应为“write down things”；“date”应为复数“dates”。