Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和完整的句子结构，表达不自然且信息不明确。建议用完整句子表达观点，并且说明原因，避免断断续续的表达。

Ejemplo: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often feel stressed, which affects my memory in daily life.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子描述具体忘记了什么事情，并说明后果或感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot to go to the hospital for an important appointment, which caused me a lot of trouble.

Sugerencia: 回答中断断续续，表达不流畅。建议用完整句子清楚说明需要记住的内容及原因，增加细节使回答更具体。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember financial and economic data because my job involves making investment decisions.

Sugerencia: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，缺乏逻辑。建议用完整句子说明记忆方法，并举例说明如何帮助记忆。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things in my notebook to help me remember them better.

× No, because of the reasons Stressful. Daily life my memory has become. Awful.

✓ No, because of stressful daily life, my memory has become awful.

原句语序混乱，缺少连贯性。应将短语合理连接，形成完整句子。建议将“Stressful. Daily life”合并为“stressful daily life”，并调整句子结构，使其通顺。

× Yes. Last time I've forgot to. Went to the hospital. And.

✓ Yes. Last time I forgot to go to the hospital.

“I've forgot”是错误的过去时态形式，正确应为“forgot”。此外，句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。

× I have to remember. The Financial reporting Economique. Data. Because my job is. Investments.

✓ I have to remember the financial reporting economic data because my job is in investments.

句子断裂且单词使用不当，“Economique”应为“economic”，且应将句子连贯表达。

× I usually write it on. My notebook. However, I. Sunnyside. We hug. I don't even remember too. Watch it.

✓ I usually write it in my notebook. However, sometimes I don't even remember to look at it.

原句断裂且含义不明，需重组句子使其表达清晰。将“write it on my notebook”改为“write it in my notebook”，并调整后半句表达记忆困难的意思。