Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Yes, of course. Yes, of course I am good. I am good at memorizing skill and because of my study I have to read a lot of books and I and tried to analyze and synthesize Sam and and also. I'm rich.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes it was happen it last month I4 and I remember that I forgot my phone very is and. I I'm. And I didn't.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
The first seeing need to remember in my daily life is. Punctuality and because I'm a punctual person and I to do everything on time and I everything remember.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
If I remember important things, firstly I have to planning my journal and also. I tried to write down on my schedule and through throughout my busy schedule.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Ваш ответ не очень естественный и содержит много повторений и грамматических ошибок. Постарайтесь отвечать более связно, избегая лишних слов и повторов. Используйте простые и понятные предложения, чтобы выразить свои мысли ясно.
Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often read many books for my studies. I try to analyze and synthesize the information to remember it better.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: Ответ очень непонятен и содержит много ошибок. Постарайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя полные предложения и избегая бессвязных фраз. Также старайтесь использовать связующие слова для логичности.
Ejemplo: Yes, last month I forgot my phone at home, which was very inconvenient for me.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не очень логично построен. Старайтесь строить предложения правильно и использовать связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и естественным.
Ejemplo: The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is punctuality because I like to do everything on time.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре предложений. Постарайтесь использовать правильные формы глаголов и связывать предложения логично с помощью союзов.
Ejemplo: To remember important things, I first plan in my journal and write them down in my schedule, especially during my busy days.
× I am good at memorizing skill and because of my study I have to read a lot of books and I and tried to analyze and synthesize Sam and and also. I'm rich.
✓ I am good at memorizing skills because of my studies; I have to read a lot of books and try to analyze and synthesize them.
The phrase 'memorizing skill' should be pluralized to 'memorizing skills' to indicate ability in general (Grammar problem type ID: 1). The verb 'tried' should be in present tense 'try' to match the ongoing action (Grammar problem type ID: 6). Also, 'Sam' seems to be a typo for 'them'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.
× Yes it was happen it last month I4 and I remember that I forgot my phone very is and. I I'm. And I didn't.
✓ Yes, it happened last month and I remember that I forgot my phone.
The verb 'was happen' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'happened' (Grammar problem type ID: 5). The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words; it is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× The first seeing need to remember in my daily life is. Punctuality and because I'm a punctual person and I to do everything on time and I everything remember.
✓ The first thing I need to remember in my daily life is punctuality because I am a punctual person and I try to do everything on time and remember everything.
'Seeing' should be 'thing' to make sense. The pronoun usage is incorrect and incomplete; 'I to do' should be 'I try to do' for correct verb usage (Grammar problem type ID: 12). The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× If I remember important things, firstly I have to planning my journal and also. I tried to write down on my schedule and through throughout my busy schedule.
✓ To remember important things, I first have to plan my journal. I also try to write them down in my schedule throughout my busy day.
'Have to planning' is incorrect; it should be 'have to plan' (Grammar problem type ID: 4). 'Tried' is past tense but the context suggests present habitual action, so 'try' is appropriate (Grammar problem type ID: 6). Prepositions are corrected ('write down on' to 'write down in'). The sentence is rephrased for clarity.