Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'a good memories' ควรเป็น 'good memory' และประโยคไม่ชัดเจน ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I enjoy reading books regularly. For example, I often read psychology fiction, which helps me improve my memory by learning new stories in different ways.

Sugerencia: คำตอบมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ รวมถึงประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์และสับสน ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างเหมาะสม

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as my friend's birthday. This has caused problems because my friends expect me to remember, and I feel bad when I forget.

Sugerencia: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีคำศัพท์ผิดพลาดมาก ควรตอบโดยตรงและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม พร้อมเชื่อมโยงประโยคให้สมเหตุสมผล

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember information from the books I read because I study a lot. This helps me apply what I learn in practical situations.

Sugerencia: คำตอบมีความเข้าใจง่ายแต่มีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'brute notebook' ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและเชื่อมโยงประโยคให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

Ejemplo: I usually take notes to remember important things. For example, I write down my friends' birthdays in my notebook so that I can remember them more easily.

× I have a good memories when I was young.

✓ I have good memories when I was young.

The word 'memories' is plural, so the article 'a' which is singular should not be used. The correct phrase is 'good memories' without 'a'.

× I love to read a book lady is one of my hobby, so I boost my memory with lead a new story in different will.

✓ I love to read books; reading is one of my hobbies, so I boost my memory by reading new stories in different ways.

The phrase 'a book lady' is incorrect and unclear. 'One of my hobby' should be plural 'hobbies'. 'Lead a new story in different will' is incorrect; it should be 'reading new stories in different ways'. The quantifiers and noun forms need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, I love to re psychology Boo fiction.

✓ For example, I love to read psychology and book fiction.

The phrase 're psychology Boo fiction' is unclear and likely a typo. It should be 'read psychology and book fiction' or 'read psychology books and fiction'. The quantifiers and nouns need correction.

× Yes I have, I usually forgot about my friend birthday so it's become a issue for me because when my friend knew I can remember day birthday is make.

✓ Yes, I have. I usually forget my friend's birthday, so it's become an issue for me because when my friend knows I can't remember their birthday, it makes me feel bad.

The verb 'forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to match 'usually'. 'Friend birthday' should be possessive 'friend's birthday'. 'It's become a issue' should be 'it's become an issue'. The sentence structure and verb tenses need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Daymap so I'm so feel bad.

✓ Therefore, I feel so bad.

'Daymap' is unclear and likely a typo. 'I'm so feel bad' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel so bad'. Pronoun and verb usage need correction.

× I need to remember and know late in my book.

✓ I need to remember and know a lot from my books.

'Know late in my book' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'know a lot from my books'. Quantifiers and noun forms need correction.

× Because every day I need to read a lost, so I need to brood my memoli to remember everything in different book.

✓ Because every day I need to read a lot, so I need to broaden my memory to remember everything in different books.

'Read a lost' should be 'read a lot'. 'Brood my memoli' is incorrect; it should be 'broaden my memory'. 'Different book' should be plural 'different books'. Singular and plural forms and word choice need correction.

× To help me use it in daily life.

✓ To help me use it in daily life.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× I take some notes to remember important things, for example when I need to remember my friend birthday.

✓ I take some notes to remember important things; for example, when I need to remember my friend's birthday.

'Friend birthday' should be possessive 'friend's birthday'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two clauses properly.

× I need to write. In my brute notebook to remember it easier.

✓ I need to write in my notebook to remember it more easily.

'Brute notebook' is unclear and likely a typo; 'notebook' is sufficient. 'Remember it easier' should be 'remember it more easily' to use the correct adverb form. Pronoun and adverb usage need correction.