Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более четко формулировать мысли, избегая лишних слов и повторов. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. Since I was in second grade, I could easily memorise short stories or summaries that my teacher gave us. This skill has helped me a lot in my studies.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит неясные выражения и грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более точные слова и правильные конструкции, а также избегать разговорных слов и пауз.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I forget small things, like promises I make to myself for the day. However, when it comes to important matters, I never forget them because I feel anxious and always keep them in mind.

Sugerencia: Ответ достаточно информативен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и немного сложную структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные предложения, а также связующие слова для плавности.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things related to my work as an architect, since I handle several projects at once. Besides work, I also have to remember to eat and take my medicine because I have anemia, and missing it could lead to hospitalization.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные формулировки и связующие слова для улучшения связности и ясности.

Ejemplo: I usually try to remember important things in my mind without writing them down. However, sometimes I send myself messages, for example, about train tickets or other important details.

× I would say I'm actually kind of a proud memorizing things.

✓ I would say I'm actually kind of proud of memorizing things.

The phrase 'proud memorizing things' is incorrect because 'proud' is an adjective that should be followed by 'of' plus a noun or gerund. 'Memorizing' is a gerund here, so it needs the preposition 'of' to connect properly. The article 'a' before 'proud' is also incorrect because 'proud' is an adjective, not a noun.

× I could memorize oil.

✓ I could memorize a lot.

The word 'oil' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'a lot'. 'Oil' does not fit the context of memorizing short summaries or texts. The correct phrase is 'a lot' to indicate a large amount.

× Short summary or text or some kind of story or teacher gave us?

✓ Short summaries, texts, or some kind of story that the teacher gave us.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks proper structure. It should be a complete phrase listing the types of materials memorized, connected properly with commas and conjunctions, and including the relative clause 'that the teacher gave us' for clarity.

× But does it comes to important things in my life?

✓ But when it comes to important things in my life,

The phrase 'does it comes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'when it comes to' meaning 'regarding'. Also, 'comes' should not be preceded by 'does' in this context. The sentence also needs restructuring for clarity.

× But does it comes to important things in my life?

✓ But when it comes to important things in my life,

The verb 'comes' should not be used with the auxiliary 'does' here. The correct phrase is 'when it comes to' with 'comes' agreeing with the singular subject 'it' without 'does'.

× But does it comes to important things in my life? I never forget them because I got very anxious while thinking about them and I always remember them.

✓ But when it comes to important things in my life, I never forget them because I get very anxious while thinking about them and I always remember them.

The verb tense 'got' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'get' to indicate a habitual action. Also, the phrase 'does it comes' is incorrect as explained before.

× In my everyday life, I always have to remember everything would consider my work matters because I'm an architect and I have to remember a lot of projects, doing them all at the same time.

✓ In my everyday life, I always have to remember everything, especially my work matters, because I'm an architect and I have to remember a lot of projects, doing them all at the same time.

The phrase 'would consider my work matters' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'especially my work matters' to indicate emphasis. Also, a comma is needed after 'everything' for clarity.

× But along that I always have to remember to eat because I have a little bit trouble that I have to remember to take my medicines because I have anemia and without them I'll go to the hospital.

✓ But along with that, I always have to remember to eat because I have a little bit of trouble; I have to remember to take my medicines because I have anemia, and without them, I'll go to the hospital.

The phrase 'But along that' is incorrect; it should be 'But along with that'. Also, 'a little bit trouble' should be 'a little bit of trouble'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I don't keep track or write down important things if it's question about it, I just tend to remember it all my mind.

✓ I don't keep track or write down important things. If it's a question about it, I just tend to remember it all in my mind.

The phrase 'if it's question about it' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'remember it all my mind' is missing the preposition 'in'. The sentence is also better split into two for clarity.

× And maybe sometimes so I send myself messages about certain. Tickets on the train or something like that.

✓ And maybe sometimes I send myself messages about certain tickets on the train or something like that.

The word 'so' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Also, the period after 'certain' is incorrect and should be removed to connect the sentence properly.