Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and coherence. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, focus on using correct prepositions and verb forms, for example, 'good at memorizing'. Keep your answer concise and structured with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, I always remember my daily routine and important due dates, such as paying bills for my phone, car loan, and house rent. Additionally, I try to recall important information my wife shares with me.

Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'forget to forgetting' and 'I forward things'. Work on using correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'however' appropriately.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things occasionally. For instance, sometimes I miss the due dates for paying bills or rent. However, most of the time, I remember everything on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure your supporting details relate directly to the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember that my wife loves me very much and always takes care of me. Therefore, I want to repay her kindness and always respect her.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more varied vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words more naturally and avoid ending with 'Thank you' in your answer. Keep your sentences concise and well-structured.

Ejemplo: I usually create a timetable or make a list on my phone's notes app to remember important tasks. For example, before shopping, I prepare a list to ensure I buy everything I need. I find this method very effective for staying organized.

× Yes, I am really good in memorizing things I can remember.

✓ Yes, I am really good at memorizing things I can remember.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' when referring to ability is 'at', not 'in'. Therefore, 'good in memorizing' should be corrected to 'good at memorizing'. This is a common collocation in English.

× Sometimes I forgotten the due dates of paying bills, rent and car loans.

✓ Sometimes I forget the due dates of paying bills, rent and car loans.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb (e.g., 'have') to form the present perfect tense. Since the sentence refers to a habitual action, the simple present tense 'forget' is appropriate here.

× She always take care of me.

✓ She always takes care of me.

The verb 'take' needs to agree with the third person singular subject 'She' by adding 's' to become 'takes'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 27) but also relates to verb form (ID 2). The preposition 'of' is correctly used here.

× She always take care of me.

✓ She always takes care of me.

In the present simple tense, verbs must agree with the third person singular subject by adding 's' or 'es'. 'Take' should be 'takes' to match the subject 'She'.

× I want to do pay her back.

✓ I want to pay her back.

The phrase 'do pay' is incorrect here. The verb 'do' is unnecessary and should be removed. The correct expression is 'I want to pay her back'.

× What city was she do for me?

✓ What she does for me?

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems the intended meaning is 'What she does for me'. The original sentence misuses 'city' and verb forms. Correcting to 'What she does for me' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Well, in my daily life I make a timetable or make a list on my phone in the notes app to remember things.

✓ Well, in my daily life I make a timetable or a list on my phone in the Notes app to remember things.

The phrase 'make a list on my phone in the notes app' is acceptable but 'Notes' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun (app name). Also, adding 'a' before 'list' improves clarity.

× Sometimes when I go for shopping at that time, firstly I make list and then according to that list I can do shopping.

✓ Sometimes when I go shopping, I first make a list and then, according to that list, I do the shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. 'Firstly' is better replaced with 'first' for naturalness. Also, 'make list' needs an article 'a'. The phrase 'do shopping' is acceptable but 'do the shopping' is more natural here.