Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Actually I'm not skilled at memorizing things, especially when it comes to peoples names and faces.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I have. I forgot my passport when I was heading to the airport. I didn't have much time, so I felt Larry stressed. Luckily I managed to go back and grab it and even still catch my flight.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
In my daily life, there are numerous things to remember, especially at work place. I should keep on track of meeting their clients or customers meeting. And schedules.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I did my own traditional methods like handwriting. For example, usually I use sticky notes to the member something important. It is helpful because I can see it throughout the day.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、文法の誤り("peoples names"は"people's names")と語彙の選択に注意が必要です。また、もう少し具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。
Ejemplo: Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially people's names and faces, because I often meet many new people and find it hard to remember them all.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、"Larry stressed"は誤用で、正しくは"very stressed"です。また、文のつながりを良くするために接続詞を使うと自然になります。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot my passport when I was heading to the airport, so I felt very stressed. However, I managed to go back, get it, and still catch my flight on time.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤りが多く、内容も少し曖昧です。より明確で正確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげましょう。
Ejemplo: In my daily life, especially at work, I need to remember many things such as meetings with clients and keeping track of my schedule.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 時制の誤り("did"は"use"が適切)や語彙の誤用("to the member"は"to remember")があります。より自然な表現に直し、理由を明確に述べると良いです。
Ejemplo: I use traditional methods like handwriting notes. For example, I usually stick sticky notes to remember important things because I can see them throughout the day.
× Actually I'm not skilled at memorizing things, especially when it comes to peoples names and faces.
✓ Actually I'm not skilled at memorizing things, especially when it comes to people's names and faces.
The word 'peoples' is incorrect here because it is a plural form used to refer to groups of people from different nations or ethnic groups. The correct possessive form for 'people' (plural of person) is 'people's' to indicate possession of names and faces.
× I felt Larry stressed.
✓ I felt very stressed.
The word 'Larry' is incorrect in this context; it seems to be a typographical error or misuse. The correct adverb to describe the feeling is 'very' to modify 'stressed' properly.
× Luckily I managed to go back and grab it and even still catch my flight.
✓ Luckily I managed to go back and grab it and still catch my flight.
The phrase 'even still' is redundant and awkward here. Using 'still' alone is sufficient to convey the meaning of managing to catch the flight despite the situation.
× In my daily life, there are numerous things to remember, especially at work place.
✓ In my daily life, there are numerous things to remember, especially at the workplace.
The term 'work place' should be combined into one word 'workplace' to correctly refer to the location of work.
× I should keep on track of meeting their clients or customers meeting. And schedules.
✓ I should keep track of meetings with clients or customers and schedules.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Keep on track of meeting their clients or customers meeting' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure by combining ideas properly.
× I did my own traditional methods like handwriting.
✓ I use my own traditional methods like handwriting.
The sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'use' is appropriate instead of past tense 'did'.
× Usually I use sticky notes to the member something important.
✓ Usually I use sticky notes to remember something important.
The phrase 'to the member' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'remember' to express recalling information.