Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and provides a reason, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I can agree on this like that I have a good memory." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to limit your answer to 4-5 sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising because I have a photographic memory, which helps me recall information easily. For instance, during exams, I can remember most of the material I studied, which boosts my confidence.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question well and provides a specific example. However, try to avoid repetition like "It was the time when I have forgotten something." Use linking words such as 'because' or 'due to' to explain reasons clearly. Also, correct minor grammar errors for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, once during my exams, I forgot to bring my admit card because I was under a lot of pressure. This mistake taught me to prepare everything the night before to avoid such problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer has a good message but lacks clarity and contains some unclear phrases like '2. Alba lambing had an be humanitarian.' Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and ideas are clearly expressed. Use simpler vocabulary if needed and avoid confusing phrases.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, one important thing to remember daily is to help others. Many people today are self-centred, so it's essential to be kind and support those in need as part of our basic human duty.

Sugerencia: Your answer gives a clear method but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'in member by phone' and 'word task one has to perform.' Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: It depends on the person, but I usually remember important things by writing key points on paper or my phone. This helps me keep track of daily tasks and ensures I don't forget my schedule.

× I believe that I have a picture memory that makes it easier to remember things off.

✓ I believe that I have a picture memory that makes it easier to remember things.

The phrase 'remember things off' is incorrect because 'off' is unnecessary and does not fit here. The verb 'remember' does not require the particle 'off' in this context. Removing 'off' corrects the sentence.

× I am able to memorize most of the thing.

✓ I am able to memorize most of the things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because 'most of' refers to multiple items. Using singular 'thing' after 'most of' is grammatically incorrect.

× It was the time when I have forgotten something.

✓ It was the time when I had forgotten something.

The past perfect tense 'had forgotten' is appropriate here to indicate an action completed before another past event ('It was the time'). Using present perfect 'have forgotten' is incorrect in this past context.

× We were asked to bring or admit cards along with us.

✓ We were asked to bring our admit cards along with us.

The phrase 'or admit cards' is incorrect; it should be 'our admit cards' to indicate possession. Also, 'along with us' is acceptable but 'with us' alone is sufficient.

× I forgot to bring my admit card.

✓ I forgot to bring my admit card.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× Well according to my opinion one thing that one must remember is to lend a helping hand to others because nowadays people have become so self-conscious and self-centered that they forgot the basic humanitarian duty.

✓ Well, in my opinion, one thing that one must remember is to lend a helping hand to others because nowadays people have become so self-conscious and self-centered that they forget the basic humanitarian duty.

The phrase 'according to my opinion' is incorrect; 'in my opinion' is the correct expression. Also, 'they forgot' should be 'they forget' to maintain present tense consistency when talking about a general truth.

× So one thing that one must remember is 2. Alba lambing had an be humanitarian toward others.

✓ So one thing that one must remember is to always be humanitarian toward others.

The original sentence contains nonsensical words '2. Alba lambing had an be' which appear to be errors or typos. The corrected sentence provides a clear and grammatically correct expression.

× What it depends to person to person but my way of memorizing things is noting down the key points on a paper or in member by phone etc.

✓ It depends from person to person, but my way of memorizing things is noting down the key points on paper or in a member by phone, etc.

The phrase 'What it depends to person to person' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'It depends from person to person'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper', and 'in member by phone' is unclear but kept as is due to lack of context.

× Because by noting down the key point we are we can easily remember that word task one has to perform in the particular day and everyone get to know about a schedule.

✓ Because by noting down the key points, we can easily remember the tasks one has to perform on a particular day, and everyone gets to know about the schedule.

The sentence has pronoun and subject-verb agreement errors: 'we are we can' is incorrect and should be 'we can'; 'word task' should be 'the tasks'; 'everyone get' should be 'everyone gets'. Also, 'in the particular day' should be 'on a particular day'.