Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In your answer, try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. For example, use 'it reminds me' instead of 'it remind me'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. Use linking words like 'especially' correctly and keep your sentences clear and concise.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially numbers or small details. For instance, my friends often borrow money from me, but I usually forget until they remind me to pay them back.

Sugerencia: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Correct sentence structures like 'something is important' to 'something important'. Avoid repetition and unclear words like 'Ness' and 'May'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was very stressful because it was necessary for my school application. Fortunately, my friends reminded me just in time, so I was able to submit it before the deadline.

Sugerencia: Improve your vocabulary and grammar. Use 'plan' instead of 'plane' and correct tenses like 'have made' to 'need to prepare'. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words like 'therefore' appropriately to connect your sentences logically.

Ejemplo: Well, as a university student, I plan to apply for a master's scholarship. Therefore, I need to remember all my important documents to prepare and submit my research paper on time.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. The phrase 'if I not eat I won't be able to forget it' is unclear and incorrect. Use simple and clear sentences, and explain your method logically. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly.

Ejemplo: I usually write important things in my notes because I might forget them otherwise. For example, I always write down deadlines for schoolwork on my phone to remind myself.

× I always forget it until it remind me to pay me back.

✓ I always forget it until it reminds me to pay me back.

The verb 'remind' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to the present participle form.

× Yes, I have forgotten something is important before.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before.

The phrase 'something is important' is incorrect here. The correct form is 'something important' as an adjective phrase modifying 'something'. The original sentence has a sentence structure error.

× For example, I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was Ness which was very stressful for me because it was necessary for my school application.

✓ For example, I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was very stressful for me because it was necessary for my school application.

The word 'Ness' is unclear and seems to be a typo or misplaced word. Removing it clarifies the sentence structure and meaning.

× Fortunately, my friends reminded May just in time, so I was about to submitted before the deadline.

✓ Fortunately, my friends reminded me just in time, so I was able to submit before the deadline.

'May' is incorrect; it should be 'me' as the object pronoun. Also, 'was about to submitted' is incorrect; it should be 'was able to submit' to express capability. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb form.

× Well, I'm a university student and I have a plane to apply for masters scholarship.

✓ Well, I'm a university student and I have a plan to apply for a master's scholarship.

'Plane' should be 'plan' (a singular noun). Also, 'masters scholarship' should be 'master's scholarship' with possessive form and article 'a'. This is a singular and plural issue and article error.

× Therefore, it is necessary for me to remember all of my important documents because they had made to prepare and submit my research paper on time.

✓ Therefore, it is necessary for me to remember all of my important documents because I have to prepare and submit my research paper on time.

'They had made' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I' and the verb phrase should be 'have to' to express obligation. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb tense.

× I usually write important things on my note because if I not eat I won't be able to forget it.

✓ I usually write important things in my notes because if I don't, I won't be able to forget them.

The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to writing in notes. Also, 'if I not eat' is incorrect; it should be 'if I don't'. 'Forget it' should be 'forget them' to refer to plural 'things'. This is incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns.

× For example, I always write down to deadline after school work on my phone because it is I'm coming in for me.

✓ For example, I always write down deadlines for school work on my phone because it helps me remember.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors in word choice and structure. 'Write down to deadline after school work' is incorrect; it should be 'write down deadlines for school work'. 'Because it is I'm coming in for me' is unclear and corrected to 'because it helps me remember'. This is a sentence structure error.