Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In your answer, try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'memorize things' and 'forget it', you can use synonyms or rephrase to make it more fluent. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising, especially when it comes to numbers or small details. For instance, my friends often borrow money from me, but I usually forget about it until they remind me to pay them back.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words to make it coherent. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and check your grammar carefully.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, I once forgot to submit a crucial school document on time, which was very stressful because it was needed for my school application. Fortunately, my friends reminded me just in time, so I was able to submit it.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific supporting details. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: As a university student, I need to remember important documents related to my scholarship application and research papers. These documents help me prepare and submit my work on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes that make it hard to understand. Try to respond directly and clearly, using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary words and check your grammar.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by taking notes. For example, I always write down deadlines and homework on my phone so I don't forget them.

× my friends always borrow money from me but I always forget it until they remind me to pay me back

✓ my friends always borrow money from me but I always forget it until they remind me to pay them back

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used to refer to 'my friends'. It should be 'them' because the friends are the ones to be paid back, so the object pronoun must match the plural subject 'friends'. In English (Cambodia): Use 'them' to refer to your friends, not 'me', because you pay back your friends, not yourself.

× I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was necessary visuals very stressful for me because it was necessary for my school application, fortunately.

✓ I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was very stressful for me because it was necessary for my school application.

The phrase 'which was necessary visuals very stressful for me' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be simplified to 'which was very stressful for me' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'fortunately' is misplaced and should be removed or repositioned. In English (Cambodia): Make sure your sentence is clear and logical. Remove unnecessary or confusing words to express your idea clearly.

× My friends reminded May just in time, so I was.

✓ My friends reminded me just in time, so I was able to submit it.

'May' is a typo and should be 'me'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'so I was' needs completion to make sense, such as 'so I was able to submit it.' In English (Cambodia): Use 'me' to refer to yourself, not 'May'. Complete your sentences so they make sense.

× Actually, I'm a university student. And I have a plane to get a scholarship of Master horse, so documents that I have reserved are important things for me to remember because it helped me to repair my research paper for submitting to school.

✓ Actually, I'm a university student. And I have a plan to get a Master's scholarship, so the documents that I have prepared are important for me to remember because they help me to revise my research paper for submission to school.

Several errors: 'plane' should be 'plan'; 'scholarship of Master horse' is incorrect, should be 'Master's scholarship'; 'reserved' should be 'prepared'; 'helped me to repair' should be 'help me to revise'; 'for submitting to school' should be 'for submission to school'. In English (Cambodia): Use correct words and phrases to express your ideas clearly. For example, 'plan' not 'plane', 'Master's scholarship' not 'Master horse', and use present tense to describe ongoing actions.

× Are you Slee right? Important things are my notes because if I I know it, I won't be able to forget it.

✓ Are you sure? Important things are my notes because if I know them, I won't forget them.

'Slee' is a typo for 'sure'. The phrase 'if I I know it' has a repeated 'I' and 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'important things' (plural). Also, 'won't be able to forget it' is incorrect; it should be 'won't forget them'. In English (Cambodia): Check your spelling and pronouns. Use 'sure' instead of 'Slee', and match pronouns in number and meaning.

× For example, I always write down the important things like the deadline, after school work on my phone.

✓ For example, I always write down important things like deadlines and after-school work on my phone.

'the deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match general meaning. 'after school work' should be hyphenated as 'after-school work'. Also, 'the' before 'important things' is unnecessary. In English (Cambodia): Use plural forms when talking about general things and hyphenate compound adjectives like 'after-school'.